Quiet Poetry Lounge : sharing

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by robboy2003, Jan 15, 2007.

  1. robboy2003

    robboy2003 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    A shared glance that is enhanced by romance.

    Oh! how we have progressed and advanced. We need no other chance.

    I respect how you walk and love just the way you talk. It is so simple so why do people try to have commonality bought?

    It is not enough in this life to you do and i do what he or she likes. We are a pair so we both go there or nowhere. It is how we picture love to be fair.


    We do what is of us. Be it not the flav or what the manual gave or bust,but it is true of us. Love is linked together until dust.

    One must have the sharing,then comes the caring. Maybe along the way befalls some soul baring.

    We deem to dream that this life can be seen at the top as King and Queen and always a team.

    Copyrighted 2007 Levance robbboy2003
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This read so genuinely. Only the 2 involved can define what their love truly is. I really liked what you shared poet.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    awesome write as only thy love and loveth will know truely within
     
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    You found your "Treasure" ...bury deep in her rich-ness, ...
    great piece poet.
     
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    Thank you all.:thanks:
     
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