Black Poetry : Sharing

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Intrepid, Jan 17, 2005.

  1. Intrepid

    Intrepid Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Lets sit back listen and think things through

    I don't want to share you no more

    I don't want you to have to share me no more

    Angry with me you go there

    Angry with her you come here

    Angry with you I go there

    I don't want to share you no more

    Yeah I know the tricks of the game even if you thought I didn't

    I'm realizing I don't want to share you no more

    I will rearrange recheck revise and review

    Cause I don't want to share you no more

    I am ready... I want to ...I am willing... and able to give it all up!!!!!!!

    Can you?? will you??? are you able to?? do you want to???

    Because I DON"T WANT TO SHARE YOU NO MORE!!!
     
  2. angelicsage

    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Nice poem...

    this piece represents...
    when it starts to get real
    when all the layers of "the game"
    are torn away...and beneath it
    lies the heart of the matter...

    that sometimes...
    we don't emerge unscathed
    by any mutual agreement
    or casual situation...

    Very nice...I liked this.
     
  3. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    nice flow i like this...
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    very nice drop i hear ya on dat fo sho !
     
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    And that lightbulb moment also means that you're loving yourself a little bit more too. We all deserve to have our own. This was so on point poet, loving this.
     
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