Black Poetry : Sharing Wordz to You Mothers...

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  1. IlladelThug

    IlladelThug Active Member MEMBER

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    I should of posted this on Sunday, but wuz wit my momz...i gave her this on Mothers Day and thought i'd share it with the Destee family...to all u mothers out there, keep don what chu do...and we fathers do appreciate you mothers...1 Luv......


    Mama, you'se the lap where I was layin my head
    You cooked, cleaned and helped when I was making my bed
    You bought toys and clothes, let me taste wine once
    Forreal ma, you've carried me for much more than nine months
    Divine luck is living, with a mother like you
    You worked hard for everything, ain't no other like you
    You're all seein, for someone without their sight, you
    Are a survivor, breast cancer couldn't even fight you
    Life was rough, but my dad raised me tough
    And we lived in the same house, with full bellies enough
    Asked and we got it, it was just a matter of time
    Though you hated the rap, you never slanted the rhyme
    Telling me I was great, you kept instillin a pride
    A shoulder to cry on, to say my feelings in stride
    Grew stronger for it, then kept feelings inside
    Still you always had open arms, I'ze never feeling denied
    Striving for truth, you rarely ever told me a lie
    Like when you caught me with weed, you didn't scold me a lot
    You told me your problems, thanks for telling me why
    It's harmful, a weedman could of sold me some rock
    I stopped 'cuz your love and your veteran approach
    In the game of life, there is no better kinda coach and
    So me & my brothers, and your daughter wanna say
    We wish you the very best and a Happy Mother's Day... :hearts4:
     
  2. Poetrymama

    Poetrymama Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Beautiful tribute to your mom.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    very very sweet
    a mother's worth never can be messured
    a beautiful thing thankz for sharing :spin:
     
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    LURK Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    yea man i read this yesterday...cant believe i forgot to comment...my bad...i was feelin this here....very in depth and personal....i could relate dawg,most def.....wish i woulda wrote sumthin like this for mom dukes...instead ,i gave her a day in the massage and beauty parllor,to thank her for her hard work...lol....yea man,i bet ya ur moms cried when she read this ,right?any mother would...nice scribe 1nce again...keep flowin.....
     
  5. Prizefighter16

    Prizefighter16 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This poem is really sweet...and it flows so easily....LOVED IT

    keep the flow goin
     
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