Black Poetry : Sharing Love

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Blk Kween, Nov 6, 2001.

  1. Blk Kween

    Blk Kween Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ~ We are not promised tomorrow, share your love with those while you are able ~


    Good morning baby,

    When is the last time that I told you that I love you, or let my appreciation be known for your presence in my life?

    When is the last time I apologized for sometimes forgetting that you are not an enemy, but a healer of wounds from past pain and strife?

    ~ When the last time WAS isn’t important, as is the here and NOW ~

    The matters of your mind are captivating, and you keep me constantly intrigued.
    What was once just a feeling of want has now become a life’s need.

    For so long, I’ve wanted one to love me for who I am, and not for what I can “do”
    I’ve hungered for one that would not be about game, but about life they’d be true

    The way you look into my eyes
    Silent words powerfully speak
    The gentleness of your touch
    Calms the winds that you have stirred within me

    You have permeated through the thickness of my skin,
    And have softened my being
    I am no longer in control of what I B feeling

    Never have I been touched like this
    My heart has been sealed by your kiss
    Today I send you my love,
    As you have walked to me into a life of bliss

    Thank you,

    Your Baby



    ~ Blk Kween ~
     
  2. alyce

    alyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    The beauty of this is its power

    and the power of this is its beauty.

    Speak Poetess!

    thank you

    a
     
  3. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    so let me start by u kween

    I LOVE U:heart:

    yes tomorrow not a sure thang
    so we all should sing as i sang
    da song ..........I LOVE U:heart: :heart: :heart:
     
  4. msluciousb

    msluciousb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    As always...

    Did I smile when you asked for your coffee?
    Did I grit my teeth when your toast burned
    did I turn away from your kiss when you
    left for work this morning?
    I just called to tell you something that has been
    burning in my mind I never want a word of love
    to go unspoken to whomever I may leave behind!
    So today I called at the busiest part of your day.
    And you didn't try to hurry me away.......
    I just called to say I was thinking of you!
    And I will be waiting at the end of day!
    :D *Excuse a sista for dipping into yo flow!
    But you take me there ya know!!!!!fo sho.....:heart: BLESSINGS ON YA HOUSE!
     
  5. Watcher

    Watcher Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Yo Q!! What up with that??? He be floating your boat like dis??? Hey who da man
    or do I already know?;)

    If not who I think
    then enlighten me

    By the way how yall gone diss me like that a few days ago?? ;) but I ain't mad at ya, cause i know you handled the business!!!!
    Xtreme Style!
     
  6. James Eta

    James Eta Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Well done

    well done!

    thank you

    J
     
  7. Blk Kween

    Blk Kween Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    My Family....

    Thank you for your words of support.

    With this piece...I'd like to say that I enjoy everyones pieces...

    I am so tied up, that I am not able to respond as I'd like....
    but, I do read and enjoy all the poetic flow in this forum.

    I appreciate the love....

    Blk Kween
     
  8. Bishop

    Bishop Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Tight!
     
  9. Reason

    Reason Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    No Doubt

    Im with Bishop... it's definitely tight! Loved the way you choreographed it...

    Tell him again...

    Madd Respect
    Reas
     
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