Black Poetry : Share My World

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by DIIMOND, Oct 18, 2002.

  1. DIIMOND

    DIIMOND Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    What would it take 2 win ur love?
    What do I have 2 do
    to make you want me
    and need me the way I need u

    **** I really gotta speak my mind on this
    cause I've never been the 1 to hide my feelings
    and I think ur wonderful
    like a breath of fresh air
    and a beautiful breath-taking waterfall

    Wow!!!
    See that wasn't so hard
    I though it would be difficult 2 explain
    but the wordz are comin' out and flowing plain
    A candlelit dinner and a slow dance
    close grindin' and groovin' to our heartbeats
    is what I want with you baby..

    This is just a peek into my thoughts 4 u
    I know how 2 win ur heart...
    just by being the beautiful passionate
    Queen that I am

    and I wanna share my world with u...
     
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    cherryblossom Banned MEMBER

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    Well, as soon as you can get this message to him, you'll be cooking with gas! lol

    Sometimes, the written word is the best communication. It's a device that captures one's attention w/o room for immediate rebuttal or rash answer.

    So, this piece seems the perfect little "love letter" to the one you're thinking of. If you don't speak up, some other woman will!
     
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    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    i feel you Big D

    it's been awhile

    a good while

    hope all is good

    great piece of art here Queen
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Yes world shared is beautiful
    let me inside your world
    to share the wonders of joy
    where two souls kiss under
    the starz by da flickering glow
    as da candle burn
    let me drift inside for a moment
    to reveal my love of a true king
    let da doors of ya heart open
    to be venture upon for ya world
    brings warmth !
    let me share yo world ...

    This joint was tyte sis loving it
     
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