Black Poetry : Shame

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by pztvnrg, Apr 2, 2001.

  1. pztvnrg

    pztvnrg Active Member MEMBER

    Joined:
    Apr 2, 2001
    Messages:
    41
    Likes Received:
    0
    Ratings:
    +0
    passed you on the street today
    for just one moment i wanted to stop
    but did not i'm already late
    i continue toward all that waits
    the business of the day is calling
    an inexplicable feeling accompanies
    me to my destination
    i shrug it off and get down to business
    with the tasks at hand complete
    i am ready to go home
    there it is again that mysterious feeling
    its presence much stronger
    and confronting me
    i passed you by like some non-entity
    but
    i saw you
    weighing my minutes against your homelessness
    i kept going
    now i sit
    praying for another opportunity
    promising to do it differently
     
  2. GQ

    GQ Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Joined:
    Mar 17, 2001
    Messages:
    2,220
    Likes Received:
    3
    Occupation:
    United States Air Force
    Location:
    South Jersey
    Ratings:
    +3
    Yeah Pztvnrg...

    We're somtimes surrounded by another's plight and we choose to look the other way!!!

    Glad your character recognized!!!

    Enlightening piece fa sho!

    Peace
    GQ
     
  3. pztvnrg

    pztvnrg Active Member MEMBER

    Joined:
    Apr 2, 2001
    Messages:
    41
    Likes Received:
    0
    Ratings:
    +0
    thank you 'G', pztvnrg
     
Loading...