Black Poetry : Shame (Pt. 3 of the UgLy series) (Somfin Real)

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  1. the_story

    the_story Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    clouds coating her sunshine...
    her head bowed face covered from Him...
    What would He say to her?
    Would He frown and cast her away?

    She wanted to hide her face from Him,
    to hide under a rock somewhere in Alaska
    desolate, yet He saw her she knew He did...
    Wasn't He tired of looking at her?

    She was so sinfull she wondered
    when He would just let her b...
    or maybe God was just waiting for her to make a mistake...
    that would be a plausible reason,
    He has givin up on her...
    shoot, she would give up on her...smh

    well anyway, she wonders
    why He alwayz seemed to ask her to come back
    she is going to hell anyway...
    why does He love what he can never have?

    never touch....
    and never have the person love Him,
    The Almighty God love him back?
    cuz she doesn't love Him...
    yet every night
    she can still fill His presence
    Him pulling on her heart
    Him trying soo hard...
    smh fillls her heart with tears...
    why doesn't He just give up...
    maybe one day he will...

    poem to be continued...

    (mornin fambly, just writin whats on my mynd, thas all finish this later...

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  2. SensualReality

    SensualReality Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Stooory hello lil sista lovin this piece as well as the others how many more comin?:lol:and ummmm I believe you got that fever too.:wink:
     
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    the_story Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    lol...maybe ima write jus too more...lol...naww forreal glad u liked it...
    :heart:
    -story
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    NICE DROP THIS WAS REAL SMOOTHLY DONE
     
  5. the_story

    the_story Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks for the love rich, glad u liked it...
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    Nice drop lil Sis!
    I really enjoyed it!
    Gotta find part1 and 2 now!
     
  7. the_story

    the_story Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks for the love, purple
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    -story
     
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    I like where you went with it so far, please, continue.
     
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    the_story Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks for the love watz working on it as we speak....
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    Very nice drop, lm diggen your style
     
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