Khasm13 : shallow shadows....

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  1. Khasm13

    Khasm13 STAFF STAFF

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    underneath cobblestone walkways on the dark days
    moving inch by inch on floors peanut butter parquet....
    a smooth jezebel sung by sade
    seconds after the shark teeth party
    light rocks the body dark brings the shottie....
    side by side with street lamps
    sickle cell representatives of hell
    post up and camp close up to the off ramp
    the chinchilla champ with a magilla da gorilla grunt chant
    tells you to punt or run a quick slant
    on a supa slick undercover rant
    adam ant chasing the paper raper until he pants
    off of city curbs spittin plenty words until he cant
    the angle of reflection is moving...zoom in
    cause the shade is looming...
    the darkness has a blade pursuing....
    and only the sun can disarm
    with a dash run to the alarm...
    some soldiers of the shadows do mean you harm
    like pigs on a farm without spiders in the barn...
    using chains like yarn.....
    knitting constraining mittens tight fittin
    another shade tree spittin shady
    like a crazy he/she lady holdin a plastic baby
    filled with water infected with rabies and hades....
    i tell ya...
    it's the skyscrapers that made these
    forbidden dark ridden day dreams....
     
  2. MRS. LADY

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    wow this is a master flow

    undiluted truths from the mind of a god!!

    one love
     
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    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    yea man

    the concrete fortress has a way of doing that

    hot mayne!
     
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    Those visuals....those images almost came off of the page. Do flow on poet.
     
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    for a 'nice guy'
    you got a helluva dark streak lol
    All Im sayin is if I had chiren... you wouldnt be my first pick to tell em a bedtime story :look:
    smh
    i can hear the babies cryin now lol
    Well done brotha you know you got skills :read:
    I wasnt scared not that much :look: lol
    much props brotha Khasm
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    man this was str8 off da hook you took it to the teeth of the shadows
     
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    LOL! I with Triniti! And I'll never be able to look at those old cartoons the same ever again!

    But, I did enjoy the story!
     
  8. Khasm13

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    sometimes being the nice guy all the time....
    is boring....and non-productive....lol
    thanks for the love fam....

    and trin...the children love my stories....nah!

    one love
    khasm
     
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    i love my cartoons....lol

    one love
    khasm
     
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