Black Poetry : shallow-ality

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by hi-wa, Jul 15, 2002.

  1. hi-wa

    hi-wa Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i remained audible...........

    to all that was happening around me
    to all that was puzzlin my prefix
    that gave me a blank view of
    reality.

    i was silent
    i was calm, i let the controllable
    gain control
    and roll over my devotion
    to the talents i came into this world with,
    i didn't do ****.........but sit
    and admit that i
    was enclosed in a [fiber]glass box
    that seemed unbreakable........for twenty four
    and-a-half years
    until the crevice decreased
    and time lapse

    and my shallow-ality
    became all too personable
    and the versitile
    humanbein that once was
    was no more...
    i feel sorry for all those
    that knew "me" before
    cause he is no longer
    with this individualist
    i am selfish to my talents
    becasue it's apparent
    that status matters, but i care
    not to dare venture into
    another episode of "theclubev'ryweekend"
    so i begin
    to delve into unknown areas
    looking for the hi-wa
    that extends to infinity...

    serenity



    a month'a'sundays c. 2002
     
  2. j'hiah

    j'hiah Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i feel ya'.

    nfinite
    jh.
     
  3. GA_Sunshyne

    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    gaboi.


    ...i'm looking forward to becoming betta acquainted
    with this new more talent conscious & peaceful you...
    (i hope he sticks around longer than... well... i won't
    go there! LOL :tongue: )

    i am loving your flow...

    alwayspeace.

    elayne.
     
  4. Natasha

    Natasha Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    the evolution from Boy to man is simply ...breathtaking :)
     
  5. hi-wa

    hi-wa Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanx fam.preeshayt the comments.

    SS: the old me is still here. just polishing the
    rough edges a little.

    JH: glad u reached out

    NAtasha: breath mommy......:) glad u were
    liked it.
     
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