Black Poetry : shall we talk?

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by baller, Sep 24, 2002.

  1. baller

    baller Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Excuse me
    For spewing forth
    Unintelligible word choices
    While trying to be heard

    WORD

    Complex sentences
    From beginning
    To ending
    Thinking
    My **** won’t quit

    But that’s irrelevant

    Now that I have this chance
    I wanna apologize
    For deceptions
    Draped over lies
    Coz
    Lately
    I’ve come to realize
    Love AIN’T love
    Without you in my life

    Let me take this
    Just one more step
    Hold up…gurl
    Don’t trip

    In another life
    I was shallow
    I just didn’t care
    But…in this life, I’m deep
    My love…sincere

    So, I take this
    Opportunity
    To step to you
    Righteously

    Please believe

    The pain I caused
    THAT was another life, too
    I just wanna make you happy
    And be close to you.
     
  2. redlady

    redlady Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    no one can flow it like you black.
     
  3. elayne.

    elayne. Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i.b.


    i wonder if... well... forget it! you wouldn't admit
    that i was right even if'n i was!! :wink: i loved
    the flow of this... & i gotta agree wit what red
    said. keep droppin' your unique thang all ova
    this heah page!! :D

    itsallLove, chile.

    elayne.
     
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    wildflower7 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i guess that's babyboy's confession...
    i love this too...
    -7:spinstar:
     
  5. baller

    baller Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    there's an old saying; when it's time for a child to learn...he'll learn.

    when it's time for changes to be made...changes will be made.

    THANKS for reading.
     
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    Gaylee Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    It takes a man to learn this lesson, and how sweetly this one did. What lovely words of new beginnings.
     
  7. alyce

    alyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    feelin it... you drop the wisdom, yes you do!

    thank you for this!

    alyce
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    indeed dis speaks loud wit much wisdom
    we learn, we change , we move
    man ya hittin' big time
     
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