Black Poetry : Shakin Me!

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  1. Desert Storm

    Desert Storm Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I'm a lil bit wiser now
    Able to cover much ground
    Than where I started before

    Visions get me caught up in the laughter
    As you can imagine
    I want you endure the temporary torture

    But more so
    For your convience
    Baby please listen

    Don't ignore
    The pain is more than I care bare

    So listen baby,baby,baby
    When I say
    Softly adjust
    You deep and so tongue kissing

    Mobility and free to xscape
    Saying,"Who can I run to"
    Remember the tune?
    The intro makes me reminece so
    And I can't complain

    Imagine all the times
    Treated and compassion arises
    Orange clouds drifting by melon blue skies

    Solarized my softly colored strokes
    I Give My All

    Beautifully orchastrated pages
    Regular costumer
    For your fever of expression and passion
    Tugs and grabs at my mind

    Comprehend
    How much you make me feel
    So gifted
    Even when I won't reach out to touch you

    You give me the ability to think
    And lift my heart up to clearer and sunny days

    Beyond the rain
    Something bout the weather that makes me wanna play
    Go and take off my clothes
    And surrender to the showering of sprinkling drizzles of water droplets
    Standing in the rain
    Soaking wet

    Something intrigues me of the storm
    So beautiful the sound
    It makes outside my window during the winter
    Massaging my tensity
    And surroundering me with it's protection and makes me want to shout

    So free!
    Shaking Me!

    Desert Storm
     
  2. GA_Sunshyne

    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    STORMY ONE...

    i loved this... thanks for sharing...

    this part really struck a chord (no pun intended :) )
    with me:
    keep on singin' lil' sis...

    NothinButLove...
    Sunshyne~
     
  3. Desert Storm

    Desert Storm Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Sunshyne!,Sunshyne!,Sunshyne!

    Thanks,Sunshyne,you're a doll! Very humbled by your entree. Thanks sis,you don't know how much you're replys mean to me. (((UNDERGROUND))). Hearing me?!!!
    Desert Storm
     
  4. one_love

    one_love Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    There's nothing like a storm to take your feelings away. I truly feel this one. I love storms..they grab at you...and wash your feelings away. This is a great scribe.
    One_Love
     
  5. Desert Storm

    Desert Storm Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks one. Much love. You brighten up my day!
    Desert Storm
     
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    UbZoRbShUn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Storm

    i like the way you put this one out there.




    one
     
  7. Desert Storm

    Desert Storm Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    hey it's funny you'd pull this one up gurl wow, not going to forget who i am
    thanks gurl
    sincerely,
    D
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    gurl now u know ya bad
    dis had depth and sweetness ringing
    i love how u posed dis here piece of art
     
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    Thanks 'Zorbsh'n for bring'n this to the top.

    Very Nice Desert Storm ... glad i didn't miss it this time :toast:

    :heart:

    Destee
     
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    b(YOU)tiful.
     
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