Black Poetry : SHAKE SHAKE SHAKIT!!!

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  1. DymePlaya2g

    DymePlaya2g Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    10:30pm
    I grab my bag
    hop in the jag
    let the top back
    play my favorite track
    artist, Jill Scott
    taking me on a long walk
    while i roll down L.A. streets
    groove to soulful beats
    pull in the lot of the club
    patrons stare
    picture me bare
    and hit the ATM for dubs
    walking with authority
    no one alive is ignoring me
    put my **** down and walk away
    your chit chat is boring me
    lights down
    i step on stage
    shaking my ***
    **** the 1's 5's and 10's
    20's and higher
    shawty needs a new benz
    GUCCI shades and gear
    ice for my fingers
    and ice for the ears
    gimme money
    to hell with friends
    unless they got what i got
    and pull what i pull
    cash motivated
    money orientated
    was the GOLDEN rule
    songs done
    time to jet
    you saw me work it
    but there's something you won't forget
    something more you saw in my eyes
    something not captured by my thighs
    or pecs, or abs, or dick
    not even my ***
    what you see is intangible
    not irrational
    but actual
    what you see is CLASS
    utmost sophistication
    like a riviera vacation
    cash isn't really your motivation
    but for now you lie to yourself
    accumulating your perception of wealth
    you say you don't wanna judge
    although the lifestyle is corrupt
    **** is all I CAN say
    and...
    I'm glad I grew UP!!!

    Love&Respect

    ~from my journal's pages, youthful ages, premature stages, uncontrolled rages, these words come from, these words speak from, these words, these words, these words...
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    U R MOST DEF IN DA HOUSE
    ROLL ON AND FLOW ME MO!
    LOVIN' IT
     
  3. Afridancr

    Afridancr Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    SPEAK!!!

    this was tight playa!!:)
     
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    Desert Storm Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    wow

    Umm this one kept me drifting,far far away. I seem to be doing that a lot these days. Oh did I say dat out loud? Nice one. Dymeplaya, Sweet.
    Desert Storm
     
  5. DymePlaya2g

    DymePlaya2g Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    $$Rich$$-- thanks playa...just spit something new, check it out!!!

    AFRIDANCR-- Ur comments are love!

    Desert Storm-- When u drift off, u always make it back so it's all gravy :)

    Love&Respect!!!
     
  6. LISTERSCRIBIN'

    LISTERSCRIBIN' Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i like the flo of this piece, too. keep on scribin'...i see you layin' it down by the stroke of yo pen, now, that's alryght wit me.
     
  7. DymePlaya2g

    DymePlaya2g Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ~LISTERSCRIBIN~ Glad i have ur blessings...LOVE&RESPECT!!!
     
  8. shaneak

    shaneak Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Tiiiiight!!!

    Now that was da bomb...I was definitely feeling that!!!!
     
  9. DymePlaya2g

    DymePlaya2g Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    SHANEAK-- if u felt it then i did my job...appreciate ur love!

    LOVE&RESPECT!!!
     
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    'Playa, 'Playa,

    lay it down. lay it down!!!

    one love,blak
     
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