Black Poetry : Shaka-- song poem # 10

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by deepy, Aug 8, 2004.

  1. deepy

    deepy going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    It's another day, but a day with shaka
    another day, smiling day with shaka
    here we sit upon a train
    throusand thoughts going through our brains
    i don't know him and he don't know me
    But
    we can feel our spirits free
    me and shaka

    wrapper crushing-nestles gushing
    sitting on A train with shaka
    tissues, WOW i don't have any
    and he's eating, eating candy
    "i dont need i lick my fingas"
    me, i say i must rememba
    sitting on a train, moving from complain -ing
    about the need to save some - cause it aint about more candy
    sitting on a train - spirits riding high

    another day, a day with shaka
    another day smiling day with shaka
    here we sit upon a train - throusand thoughts running thru our brains
    I don't know him and he don't know me
    WE can feel our spirits free
    me and shaka - me and shaka
    me and shak, shak, shak, shak,
    SHAKA
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    pen blazzin i see lovin da flowz
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    loving the flow..
    i love ya style
    nice scribe
     
  4. Alpha Male

    Alpha Male Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Reply to Deepy

    Deepy, the mind spelling, spell binding attraction of SHAKA, DEEPY’S obsession
    She felt his scintillating aurora, as she sat in a warm sea of his sensuous impression
    Deepy, did you wish you were the candy? did you wish his tongue explored you as it?
    What was it like to be so near, so close, close enough to be loved, close enough to submit?

    Great poem you have made
    Now go and seize a great day

    Please show me some of your love
    Today read and reply to my thread entitled:
    " Dear Alpha Male, please help me, signed the slave from torment land"
    Please tell me about my skills, tell me if their weak
    or show nuff real----------Thank You
    If you read and replied once!
    Do it again, kick up a notch!----------Thank you
     
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    Indeed it is a sweet song song!!!!

    Now come on it chat and let us
    hear you sing it!!!!

    Nice drop Sis!
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I liked Alpha's response to this....so what's the good word, deepy? Seriously, you have such a creative mind, and a sly way of turning a phrase, keep those flows coming.
     
  7. deepy

    deepy going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    once again....thanks for support and thoughts..
    and alphamale (and watz)
    shaka is my godson...he was about 6 or 7 on that day...
    and it was our first time just the two of us...and i didn't have
    any children then....
    i keep stating...releasing the old ..so i can let in ...what will be
    and alpha i am coming to you.
    thanks destee family...all of you...and you moderators...god bless ya..
    you be roaming...roaming..
     
  8. angelicsage

    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Love the mysticism
    and rhythm woven into this piece...

    Instantaneous Attraction on the A train...

    Love it!
    Sage
     
  9. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks for setting us straight on this deepy. Alpha's praise sounded so convincing...well, anywho....now we know. My response still stands though.
     
  10. who~is~she

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    beautiful drop
     
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