Black Poetry : shadows

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  1. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    peace lay down in da soul…
    shadows cover what is known…
    sumthin came and drop down..
    now it’s a race ta win
    back da peace in da soul..
    over turning and judging..
    what ya call friend….seek cover fo
    da forest have no fear…
    takes ya whole….seeds buried ta
    grow in da spring..comes out in
    da winter…lack of will never on time…
    wait for it ta unfold tryin ta define why
    its lost…fallen in a black hole…
    bring up ta fall down…ill ta da
    way it was made..but not ta be..
    instead of change….walk in ta walls...
    da lights have drawn closed...
    shame all around....mystic magic
    plays with thy soul...
    twisted forces emerge...
    it denies da place.....searchin
    ta destory...as a whole.....
    sky darken storm is here...
    dont sleep over...
    change thy will..open space...
    gather whats been told....
    and begin ta heal...
    no ways out they scream...
    i scream back ya a dayum lie....
     
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    this is tyte...i like the style...
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    whoaaaaaaaaaaaaa mad tyte scribe sistah
    this was butta smooth
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thank you lovely for the read...mush love girl....

    thanks rich for comin though..butta smooth huh...
     
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    most welcome ......da flow was str8 tyte smooth
     
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    :angel1: just glad you took time to read
     
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    feeling you on this scribe
    very nice flow
    Peace
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Olakuoto..thanks for da read...much love

    Bluewater....glad ya feel the flow....thanks for the read
     
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    Thanks

    Nice, really nice, Thanks for sharing that Love.
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks for takin time to read...
     
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