Black Poetry : SHADOWS of the SKY

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  1. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Where the line of the sky fuses
    from its dusted orange into
    paradigms of light blue
    wreaths of smoking curls rise
    up high into thin air
    then points to the distant
    home of relief
    Clearly etched where the lands
    and cloudlands touch, then die,
    my solitary mother stands
    in her wardrobe of white
    Not the only habitation living
    peaceful in these lands by day or by night,
    Rolling in it's magnitude from sky
    to sky
    the upward smoke floating ascends
    in between my house
    and thy kingdom's open doorway
    Meek and humble, a shadow-like
    figure, there stands my
    Black Queen who birthed me
    Eyes having lost their lusture
    so long ago
    She looks towards the empty --
    the land I live now ~ below
    to see if
    her family is on the the
    path called Righteous Road
    I know she doubts we're
    ever coming home
    to rest with her


    (c) 2001 SOULOFASISTA
     
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    and.....I thanks u brotha
    for the SoulurN2....thanx
    for blowin' my horn...I likez
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    *****Stay Tuned!!

    Much :heart: for ya'!!

    Be peaceful...
     
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    hmmm, i like the twist on this...keep scribin poet

    ***homecoming***
     
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    captivating....

    as I gaze into your soul I am enraptured by the magnificent essence of divine experience...scribe on 4 sho!
     
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    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    dnommo~

    Glad ya' like da 'twist'...
    and the piece of ME!!

    Thanks for readin'...much :heart:
     
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    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Twofish....

    Thanks for readin'....glad ya' see
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    your stuff is ALWAYS on point!

    thank you!

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    Why thank you...

    brotha Belahni!
    Glad ya' liken ya' some of the SoulurN2!!

    Thanx for the comps!!
     
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    My sistah ....

    Sherykah .... if you like it then I Love It!!
    Thanks for reading the SOULOFASISTA!!

    Much :heart:
     
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