Black Poetry : shadows of love

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  1. dnommo

    dnommo Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I find myself staring at the wall
    With eyes wide shut by the dark
    And I see your smile dancing with
    The shadows of the shining moon;

    My vision is clouded by the blue of
    The moon as it peeks through my shade
    And beckons me to travel along its rays
    Into a world of new found trust of love;

    I wish to journey far along its axis
    Allowing my senses to be entertained
    By the fragrances of you capturing me
    In its wake of innocence and truth;

    Can I dance with you my dear when the
    Days grow long and the sun sets before
    The lights dim on your day as you open
    The sunroof to see the stars smile back;

    I wish to embrace your dreams within
    The framework of my artistic hopes to
    Paint a life of pleasure for my new found
    Treasure is held safely within your ribs;

    Your beauty keeps me smiling not from
    The aspects of your outer shell but the
    Intracies of your inner mind for the truth
    Of my love originated in your spirit;

    I find myself staring at the wall with eyes
    wide shut by the dark and I see your smile
    dancing with the shadows of the moon to
    form an outline of you and I as one entity…
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    within ya vision

    she dance in yo darken eyez
    MR.D ya in da Lab i see...:)
    just beautiful art of display
     
  3. dnommo

    dnommo Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    naw $$$RICH$$$ it is YOU whose been in da lab...

    dropping vials of heartstrings on the new family...

    betta watch out...you gonna start a $$$RICH$$$ addiction in here...
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    MR. D

    I've been in EL Labo but u working up some vibes
    that mesmerize the whole place .......well u know
    how we do it from da lab:D
     
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    dnommo Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    no doubt but i don't get as many hits lately. i haven't been in da lab for a while. had to climb on the political side or a minute...but i will definitely be up in here droppin seeds for bigger and better harvest...

    thanks for the read...

    keep da lab hot...
     
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    oooooooooweeeeeeeeee! MR.D

    :cool: Diggin yo flo , and I know you and Rich sit back and watch the show...YOU AIN'T SEEN NOTHING YET......BRING IT! LOVE YOUR WORK, TWERK IT BOI!
     
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    My poet friend

    Reading you is a peaceful journey. with every descriptive line you take me in-to your world and what a beautiful place it is..where the shapes are soft and the motion is soothing. As my eyes progress towards the end of verse...I feel no remorse for the end of poetry..only the sweetness of the release..

    *orgasmic poetry*



    :wink:
     
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    i don't get off like hunter {LOL}:)

    but the flow was tyyght.

    LET THE RIVER FLOW.
     
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    y'all trippin'...

    thanks for the read and baller, bro' you gots me laughin over here...

    much respect to all

    one.
     
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    I like this one here Dnommo....
     
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