Black Poetry : Shadows Falling , Voices Calling!

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  1. msluciousb

    msluciousb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Shadows falling , voices calling
    Becking me into the dark
    Images ambiguous,voices melodious
    Still with caution I move forth

    Shadows falling, voices calling
    holding my breath in it's hand
    This be no mortal man
    Icy fingers of dread ,take shape
    over my head

    Shadows falling, voices calling
    wishing for daylight and silence
    No lanterns or man made light
    This tenuous feeling makes me
    want to take flight

    Shadows falling, voices calling
    coming closer and louder it
    seems...
    I shake and I shiver, and my
    conscience mind delivers
    reality with the wink of an eye

    Shadows falling, voices calling
    coming closer and louder it
    seems...
    Ah, I awaken , to find it was only
    a dream!!!!!!:D
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    now i lay me down to sleep

    when u rest on the notion of thoughts
    u dream of da minds motion only to awaken to
    another sweet dream .......nice flow here gurl!!!:D
     
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    loved the ending
    caught me by surprise
    but daylight
    do help stave off
    night fright
     
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    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    MSB

    NICE flow
    nice rhythm
    nice ending

    i give it a "10"
    and we have a winner

    no really this was nice
    art

    great work

    DSSNY
     
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    Mz. B..

    Now, thats a dream I
    would have been glad to
    wake up from......nice flow..
    keep em commin sista!


    Epiphany :heart:
     
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