Black Poetry : Shackled

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Miss Lead Luv, Jul 19, 2003.

  1. Miss Lead Luv

    Miss Lead Luv New Member MEMBER

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    I'm a long time lurker, first time poster....let me know what yall think....


    Lost

    Relaxin on this concrete terrain,
    Where respect is contained,
    In long term oppression and temporary gains.
    The true but few heros refrain,
    But barely maintain,
    Gotta hop on the train,
    Freedom bound,
    But the railroad is underground,
    And very seldomly found.
    We can't even find ourselves.
     
  2. Alizentang

    Alizentang Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Welcome!!!!:wave:
    This is a nice piece.
    Looking forward to reading more of you!
    Welcome to Destee's!!:grouphug:
     
  3. blakverb

    blakverb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Welcome Queen,

    This piece is dug...no question. It looks like you write with a clear vision on what's really going on. Keep lettign your pen speak to the masses.

    blak
     
  4. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    welcome welcome welcome !!!

    welcome to destee.com poetic playground
    welcome to the family of love & bond
    welcome from above as i watch dis smooth flow
    u pose wit ya pen that hold much depth welcome !:)
    :wave: :wave: :wave: :wave: :wave:
     
  5. angelicsage

    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    The flow is quite socially and individually conscious.

    Welcome, will look for more of you!
     
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