Black Poetry : sexx versus luv

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  1. Sha'iyn

    Sha'iyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    in the red corner weighing in at an undisclosed weight
    coming from most cities and every state
    holding a record that's oh, so great
    no love lost and 99 knockouts straight


    another TKO... the "L" to the "O"
    i think you better let it go
    do it nice and slow don't say no, just show...
    LUV
    !!![/
    COLOR]

    now, in the blue corner weighing in at 187
    hailing from hell but, feels like heaven
    used as a weapon no half-steppin'
    no life lost until the shootout happens

    "What you doin' in my woman's skirt!"
    "I didn't know you was comin' home early from work!"
    make a Clark Kent go berserk
    end up burnt getting probed by a nurse...
    lay back while I inject... SEXX
    !!!


    "Sexx comes out swinging and hits with a hard right
    left jab, another left jab, uppercut 'slice'
    Love is going down... Good night"

    "Wait a minute, folks! Love is back up
    Sexx just got smacked up"
    "Now, Sexx is starting to slack up
    and then goes limp and that's tough...
    to finish a fight like that."
    "Sexx is trying to bite an ear!"
    "...and Love bites back!"
    "Ladies and Gentlemen, this is an all out war!
    Pandemonium here on the canvas floor."
    "The ref is just letting it all take place
    Look at Sexx's face, Sexx swings from the waist."
    "Love uses the back with grace"

    Ding, ding, ding!
    Round 2

    "That first round was like Whew!
    Sexx's sexy eyes are like his trunks...
    Blue."
    "Love comes out stronger than ever...
    Tougher than leather...
    a right, left hook, right jab, left hook
    somebody throw in the book."
    "Don't you mean the towel?"
    "Gimme a break. whatever, buy a vowel."
    "Love throws a combination and Sexx is down
    Love yells,
    'I'm the greatest!' and the crowd goes wild."
    "7, 8, 9... it's all over. Love has won the fight."
    "Sexx doesn't even see the light.
    Somebody get Sexx a tissue and he'll be alright."
    "Let's have a word with the champ,"
    "What's up?"
    in the first round, "Why didn't you duck?"
    "I was just sizing 'em up and ended up stuck. He's a good boxer but, me, he can't touch."
    "So, champ, tell me, who's next up?"
    "I got nothin' but, LOVE and I don't give a F***!"[/COLOR]:court:
     
  2. Yemoja'sGoddess

    Yemoja'sGoddess Banned

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    :hi: Sha'iyn:hi:

    LMAO!!! THIS WAS AWESOME! I was Ringside watching it happen!:gossip: Poor SEXX, never had a chance, although he was very tempting at first glance... LUV always reigns supreme... much stronger and last far after the C.R.E.A.M., SEXX at times, can be the man of the hour, yet LUV continues to lace my D.R.E.A.M....:11900:

    Flow on Poet, Very entertaining, expressive write, Keep on...:welldone:
     
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    Sha'iyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this just one of those spur of the moment joints. i'm glad you could follow it Yemoja's Goddess. I need another outlet for all this heat!
     
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    Da battle continues cause Sexx will come back in a rematch again and again
    where love (luv) is pitted in da ring who outweights da best .......another round for da
    champ .........lol

    this was so cool and well created
     
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    The winner and still champion....Love!!! Had to laugh at love being all cocky at the end. Loved the concept and the way you crafted this poet.
     
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    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    hahahhahahahaha

    hooray for love

    this was real original poet

    and realer was the message
     
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