Black Poetry : Sexual Ride

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Nisa, Aug 28, 2004.

  1. Nisa

    Nisa Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    He's black and sophisticated
    I like what I see
    I put on the protection
    I open my legs wide
    Spread my hips
    Put my @$$ in the air
    Take a seat
    I begin riding
    To take both of us to our destination
    He moans gently as I start slow
    The Breathing..teases my erect nipples
    I clamp my legs harder to the sides..
    **** he knows how to handle the curves
    Feeling..Ooh ..Ooh..So Right...
    My legs quiver as he bounces me up and down on his lap
    The heat between my thighs increases
    Ooh his moans are gettin louder as I increase the speed
    I grip onto his shoulders for dear life
    Uhhhh....we're almost there...
    There to the point we were trying to reach
    Our bodies slow down
    He get's there first..
    I come next..
    I jump off..
    He's still hard..
    But he will have to wait for the next ride..
    I take the protection off...
    Takin it with me....
    [email protected]..
    I love to ride.......

    My Motorcycle


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  2. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    extreme rider i see !
    well played out
     
  3. PurpleMoons

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    Hahaha......

    You got me on this one!!! :eek: LOL
    Creative drop!!!!!!
    Loved it! :lol:
     
  4. caramelpython

    caramelpython Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :coffee: LMAO!

    I love the twist in the ending...lmao :look:
     
  5. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This is definitely a "Gotcha" piece cause you got us with that surprise ending. Wonderfully crafted.
     
  6. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    nice twist enjoyed the scribe!!!!
     
  7. CarrieMonet

    CarrieMonet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Very nice....
    you had me fooled. LOL!
     
  8. kente417mojo

    kente417mojo Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Whew.....wish I was that motorcycle. :grin:
     
  9. BlatinaPoet4u

    BlatinaPoet4u Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Tyte drop!!! U got me too! :bawling: :coffee:
     
  10. 7thPoet

    7thPoet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    metaphorically speaking, i'm spent...
    this was nicely done...
    lookin' for more... :toast:
     
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