Black Poetry : Sex

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by OmoObatala, Oct 15, 2002.

  1. OmoObatala

    OmoObatala Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    If I am not talking about taking my clothes
    Off in a piece it is not worth it
    You want to see me undress
    My holy veil in order for the words
    My passion to get across to you

    So I will strip down to my nakedness
    For you to see my
    Intelligence

    I will show my ***
    So you can see my
    Beauty

    I will talk about how I can blow

    Your mind away
    And make you come to
    Conclusions that you need to just listen

    I can get on hands and knees
    And work it like a porno queen
    If you can help me build my community
    Cause you to sin in the mind
    If you can show me the way to Gilead

    I sell my body for you
    To see the purpose of Magdalena
    In the bible stories your mother told you

    I can be as stubborn as Jonah and the whale
    If you want me to be
    To get you off

    Your self in the middle of
    The war that’s happening around you,
    Clean you head like Delilah did Sampson...

    Or will you try to hit
    It from the back stabbing point of view
    Like Cane did Able...

    If I am not taking off my
    Clothes you don't see me.
    I would rather keep my clothes on
    So you can't see me.
     
  2. wildflower7

    wildflower7 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    oh yeah!!!!
    you worked this flow! -7:spinstar:
     
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    redlady Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    yeah, this was cool...loved the biblical references too...feelin' it.
     
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    girl you are second to none...
     
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    Reason Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Exodus

    This is phenominal slim!!! Crazy Tight! The message and alla dat...

    Respect
    Reas
     
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    j'hiah Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    tyte name, tyte peace..

    i have my eyes open on you queen

    nfinite.....
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    i love the spirit and da mind vision
    tyght scribe
     
  8. OmoObatala

    OmoObatala Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    To you all: Rich, Reason, J'hiah, Bishop, Relady,and Wildflower7,

    Thank you so much for even reading the post that come through, I know that I am new to the game so to speak, well as far as Destee.com in concerned. I love the love that you give me with out expecting anything in return.

    Please I ask you to be honest with me and tell me what you truly think, don't hold back I am a big girl, I need to grow and to do that I need the feedback.

    if you not comfortable with that , PM me hell I want to know where I need's my work you feel.

    With humbleness in heart:
    Modupe'/Thank you/Salaamat
     
  9. Sweet baby_face

    Sweet baby_face Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    That was so hot. I'm lovin' yr self-respect.
     
  10. triniti424

    triniti424 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Nice to see you again my sista and this was a testament to the strong sistas that we have out there like ya self :)
    And ummm...it dont seem like u new to any game here :) lol
    :)