Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by garlicsalt99, Sep 28, 2008.

  1. garlicsalt99

    garlicsalt99 Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Mar 21, 2001
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    (Read for the uncensored version)

    I’m lying right here beside you with a bit of a struggle in my breathing
    Winded after an exhilarating escapade of sex I am the opposite of seething
    Having just done things that excites me just by reviewing the events in my mind
    As you’re now laying on your stomach and I’m hand polishing your behind
    Like the uncovering of natural beauty that accompanies a spring thaw
    Recent events – in review – have the same majesty, and I’m in awe
    I’m literally awestruck, or lost for words at best
    While waxing your *** … you’re rubbing my chest
    Of your energy, your sensual prowess, and your sexuality …
    The resident compulsion to **** that will warp how I view reality
    With the genuineness that puts to doubt the thought of a façade
    I’m still saying “Oh My”, and you’re finishing off my sentence “God”
    I’m lying right beside you … in the here and how
    Having had just been laid by ‘high grade’ ***** … all I can say is “wow”
    As I see the grin on your face that makes you lick your lips, and gloss ‘em
    I hold you close to me and say softly in your ears, “sex with you is awesome”

    Sex with you is awesome, like [cherry blossoms] in bloom
    You open up, make space in your place for me, and give me room
    Giving me access to your assets – different facets of your femininity
    Loving you from your naked neckline to your warm vaginal entity
    Touching your body in naughty places usually shrouded in fleshly fabric
    Uncovered as I hover over your frame – such warmth, I gotz to have it
    Taking in mentally and visually your physique, and delights that I indulge in
    From the button that is your navel, to that place that I put my bulge in
    The sensation of penetration and the initial push through stiff walls of labium wonders
    Coiling like wrestling rattle snakes … who begins on top is now up under
    Giving me the depth of your uterine playground – all that I can stand
    Giving in to the call of our genitals; surrendering to the will of our glands
    Answering natures call to get together as men and women do
    Making the twain one flesh with a bond that’s stronger than super glue
    Giving my yin to your yang … giving each-other what the other body wants
    Giving your crevice desperate thrusts, and you answer each with a matched response

    Sex with you is awesome, like giddy people who [caught some] gladness
    Allowing me to be raptured up into the wonders of your wanton sexual madness
    No sadness to adorn my demeanor, no doleful facial expressions
    Providing a sexual venue, and a love to **** … a place to offer my confession
    The exorcising of our pent up tensions brings us to release, closer than before
    The smile accompanied by the biting of your bottom lip speaks volumes more
    The work that I put in to please you is more of a passion and less of a chore
    And when you climax, as I do, you don’t just cum from your genitals, but from your core
    The twain becoming one, the meshing and merging of physical differences extols
    Not only the intercourse of man and woman, but the joining of two souls
    That binds us to each other in a way that’s not easily undone
    Like the earth … in the gravitational pull of the sun
    I feel your fingernails scraping my shoulders and digging in my back
    All the while my hands are all over your ***, about your *** crack
    As we make lust, bumping and grinding, creating a rhythm with our hips
    As the stiffness of my shaft stirs the pucker of your lips

    Sex with you is awesome, as the [thoughts come] as they may
    As we share in mutual pleasure, to you, my full attention I pay
    You made me make a face … my brow contorted and my lips curled
    In this time of intimacy and in this intimate space … you’re the only woman in the world
    Focused on doing all of the things that a good lover should
    My actions are dedicated to the pleasing of your womanhood
    Engaged in the intercourse that leaves an imprint on the human spirit
    With passion as hot as the heat of a bond fire, more intense as you get near it
    Like a thesis to be thought out and a problem to be solved
    You are the work in progress and the prize, and there is prep-work that’s involved
    As you open up to me like the pages of my favorite book
    Giving me access to every cranny … and every nook
    My lips and tongue in and on certain places on your feminine frame
    Have you huffin’ and puffin’; squeezin’ and scratchin’, and at times sayin’ my name
    From exotic to erotic, and back again I prime you to your core
    Getting your body ready for the things that I have in store

    Sex with you is awesome, like the baker who [bought some] flour
    To try new and imaginative concepts in baking, detailing his recipe for hours
    Kneading dough with fraught firm fingers and impatient palms
    That’s how I hold you close to me, singing of you as in amatory psalms
    Squeezing your *** as I pass through a cavern that welcomes me
    Taking glances at your face viewing a twinkle in your eye that I seldom see
    As you make the faces affirming that the strokes are gratifyingly pleasurable as planned
    Your passion heats up like the flame of a bond-fire that’s just been fanned
    In an ecstatic sense … I’m getting on your nerves
    Touching you in places with a stimulus your feminine ego deserves
    As you grant me access in touching and feeling each and every curve
    That lead to actions that are soon to make your hips swivel and swerve
    Your body language is clear, and it’s message – complete
    Like a female feline you stick your *** in the air, ‘cause you’re in heat
    In the face down *** up kind of ******* that you know that I love
    Me inside you, you wrapped around me … we go together like hand and glove

    Sex with you is awesome, particularly since I [saw some] moisture from your storm
    I’m referring to your ejaculate, the sign of your satisfaction, in liquid form
    To be a bit more explicit, I’m speaking of the times you busted your ‘nut
    Dousing me with your perennial wetness, watering me from your vaginal cut
    With an accompanied warmth that wets my longings
    Resulting from the motion and stimulus of our physical throngings
    In and on one another as our movements are complementary and in tandem
    Spritzing like a fountain under optimal conditions, your orgasms are far from random
    This is one of the joys of sex that turns me on … immensely
    To know that I’m satisfying you with intent … intensely
    Making your ***** slobber and your kitty kat hum
    And after a moment of silence, we sing in unison “We Shall Over Cum”
    Like priming the pump of a newly tapped well
    I tap that *** until your liquid love … you expel
    Irrigating my privates with the moisture from your own
    Letting me know that in more than one way … I’m in the zone

    Sex with you is awesome, [not some] copulatory novelty or a cheap thrill
    Our interaction is delighting and exciting, and of each other, we get our fill
    While inside of you I revel in the time together that we spend
    And I really enjoy sex with you after I’ve gotten my second wind
    Revitalized and energized I grind and wind in between the legs of the well-fated
    Slated to **** a ***** that is so beautiful, and so naked
    Spurring you on to satisfaction time and again doing the appropriately obscene
    And the rounds of intermission are filled with bouts of foreplay in between
    The sounds that I hear you make, never ceases to amaze me
    As you fill my mouth with your *****, the feel of my lips to yours drives you crazy
    Enjoying a cunnilingual dialogue, the conversation of which you want no end
    Causing you to **** my face with purpose and intent, with undulations that aren’t pretend
    Like a primary wave of a seismic event you tremble before you register on the scale
    Glossing my mouth with para-urethral juices of an orgasm that will prevail
    You shiver as your orgasm completes itself and shudder with a force
    That is the calm itself before we engage in coupled intercourse

    I can try to verbalize what sex with you is like
    With all of the words I can think of, I can come close, but not quite
    Experiencing you says indefinitely more than I could ever think to say
    So much so, that my desire for you, I can’t hold at bay
    I’m sprung like a leak, having had just been all in your mix
    But unlike the nuisance of a plumbing problem, there’s no need to fix –
    The desire and the appetite that I now have for your passionate appeal
    That makes me not just want to have sex with you, but **** you with zeal
    Like an alcoholic rife with the smell of liquor on his breath
    I have smell of your ***** on my lips, and like cheese cake made by a master pasty chef
    I want more of your lower labial lure that’ll make you want me in other ways
    That’ll result in us ******* each other which’ll result in a residual feeling or days
    Sex with you is a marvel, a spectacle, an exhibition, an extravaganza and an event
    Which leaves me breathless … and my entire body spent
    After having simultaneously ejaculated and both expelling raw cum
    We lay in state, mesmerized by the after affects … “Baby, sex with you is awesome”

    Written by: K-JiO
    © 2008
  2. queentswana

    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    You never fail to leave me in awe :qqb006:
  3. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    talking about red heat whewwwwww this was da bomb
    we gotta hook up on a piece soon ! in a collab that will rock this world.

    flo on bruh do da thang
  4. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    You expound on awesome, giving us a bird's eye view of pure sensual bliss. Quite a talented writer you are.

    4EVERLUV Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Aaah baby your AWESOME just

    Reading you is AWESOME. Yet another piece of

    Loved it....loved it gsalt.

    Much Luv
  6. triniti424

    triniti424 Well-Known Member MEMBER

    May 13, 2003
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    Sister you so crazy LOL

    Gsalt... Im sure whomever she is - shes EXXXTREMELY flattered lol
    How much more reassurance do you need than a man to be inspired into poetry by yo luvin lol
    Good job brotha & um (whomever she is) sistah too lol
  7. jus_dat_nice

    jus_dat_nice Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Aug 18, 2008
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    that basically said it all...

  8. MRS. LADY


    Dec 3, 2007
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    to seek truth
    everywhere and nowhere
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    dang don't know if

    I should be reading this at the library... j/k

    this is hott

    very very well written..... tasteful and sexy...

    the picture you paint is beautifully seductive yet lacks any lustful feelings...

    I like how you make analogies and then just say it....

    pleasure to read .... might be a pleaure to do ... lol

    for real tho bigups on this

    very talented!
  9. nevar

    nevar Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    working to own my plus size empire.....
    I'm a Georgia Peach!!!!
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