Black Poetry : Sex with the Ex

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  1. sweet apple*pie

    sweet apple*pie Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I was never in love with your Sex

    Liked it?

    Yes

    Called out your name

    got off..

    These things I confess

    But loved it, no

    Only liked it at best


    Let me tell you why...​







    You never pierced my mind
    Or ever r o c k e d me to sleep
    My eyeballs never rolled back
    From a mind body connection so deep
    And as a women I weep….


    Wanting to slurp the passionate straws of a love
    But your bowl was always empty and your mind was always cheap
    And this women weeps…
    Wondering when you’d ever get grown man enough
    To know what I need
    Sexing me in the ocean of your mental shallow seas
    As My mind smokes a cigarette and breaths…


    Inhaling this in-justification of the no good n**** decree
    Just cas I get off, doesn’t put you in tha winners circle daddy
    Cas I can get off myself…..trust
    I need a lover who wants to experience a mental lust
    Penetrate and stimulate a mental bust
    Not just putting a fork in my pie, but mentally buttering my crust
    So yeah, this women weeps



    Im so dissatisfied on top of these funky sheets
    Lookin at your fat belly as you sleep
    Mentally I smoke a cigarette and breath
    You think you did something sweetheart
    You aint done nothing to me…
    Except enlighten me to where I need to be.
    Aboard a yacht of someone eles’s deep seas
    And we about to dock G
    To someone who can mind, body, and soulfully sex me.
    I bet you never thought I’d be talking like this daddy.
    Well theirs something ultra sexy bout this brand new me


    A breed of a different kind
    An extra savvy, sophisticated feline
    Pardon Me
    But I want a man who can mentally f***my mind
    Giggles to self, cas its about d*** tyme.
    When your sexing me, tell me some s**t I don’t know
    Like, hell, the stock exchange and this bailout show
    Cas I get off to intelligence, it produces a sexy glow
    Tell me you understand who I am
    And ask me everything you want to know

    Travel in me deep..

    Do you know who I am outside these sheets?

    What I stand for, and believe?

    Do you know whats important to me?

    Do you know who I am when your on top of me??


    Do you listen to me, or just hear me?

    You aint even listen now, I see!!

    And that’s why I never loved your sex….



    Cas you were never making love to me.
     
  2. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    boom bam wammy tam dam
    sound like da sex was all spam
    never time to love or feel
    didn't listen to the truth dat's real
    couldn't see the woman he instill
    and sexing was one well a deal
    never saw thee out side da sheets
    didn't tame love mentally
    just a play pit in da treat
    tasting da gems of what's so sweet
    hurt and pain was at da feet
    swiming in one's open sea
    think how it could be
    to a new woman living free


    Well now let me see
    i can be all to thee
    change the waves of da sea
    feel ya up wit mental sexually
    look beyond da bed
    to learn and know what's in ya head
    taste the gift of such pearl
    and let u swim in my bowl world
    that is full to da top ya know
    I can pierce da mind to a go
    rock ya body gentle tenderly slow
    make ya eyez wirl way back
    connect just like dat
    i would rock ya mind real deep
    while i'm making love to thee
    tell u tings u never heard
    to make ya mental see curves
    learn all the inner show
    of everything da mind must know
    what and who u really stand fo
    and to feel ya even mo
    and then watch how u glo
    get on this yacht and away we go
    my sea is deeper than one know

    This was one deep hot tyte flow , can feel ya like never before
    tell it all let it go, as you continue to grow, into da woman u learning to know
    tyme i now let this blow ...in da wave like da truth show ....u go gurl !!!!!
     
  3. phynxofkemet

    phynxofkemet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hands Down!


    One of my favorites, ever on or off of Destee! You got me snappin my fingers and sayin' that's right. Hmmmm.... you go on an tell it like that cuz I loved every word!
    :getout::welldone:
     
  4. mizjoice

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    Ain't no point in duckin' and hidin', cause you dropped an H-bomb with this one, Sis! favorite line: "as my mind smokes a cigarette and breathes....":great:
     
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    Great piece poet, enjoyed the reality of this...^5
     
  6. sweet apple*pie

    sweet apple*pie Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you!

    Hey $$RICH$$ sweetie, thank you so much. Yes, I felt like being straight up grown in this flow....thank you for your amazing flowback, that has me thinking! hummm!
    I also thank you for the support I can hear through your words.


    Hey Phynx gurl....thank you honey! Yes gurl....I felt like putting it all out there, and tellin it like it IS. Shoooot! After I wrote it, I went to the store right...tell me why I was walkin a little taller, feelin sassy as hell! he he he....I felt this rush of excitment and release...felt so good gurl!

    :spinstar: I appreciate so much, your love of this flow.
     
  7. sweet apple*pie

    sweet apple*pie Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank You!


    Thanks Mizjoice! Yea...it's wild how, after you leave someone ( in my case ) how you say all the things you wish you had the courage to say, while you were with that no good negroe....it's all good tho! Cas I feel great now!



    Thanks so much Queen, appreciate it!
     
  8. Da Street So'ja

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    you speak clear

    if he had an ear he would listen but the real truth is
    it shouldn't have to come to that
    it should have been held down from the outset

    [email protected] belly

    you have to match with someone on your mental and expectation
    not some playa fakin'
    not someone havin' you waitin'
    someone ready to blow your mind while you're ready for the takin'
     
  9. sweet apple*pie

    sweet apple*pie Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Yes so'ja, ya right....when I was younger, I did not realize this. But I do now.

    Thanks for the love sweetie.
     
  10. FINDLOVEnMEback

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    I enjoyed reading this. Because the truth is: fulfillment of the body come from nourishing the mind first.