Black Poetry : Sex Therapy

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Phenomenon, Jul 9, 2008.

  1. Phenomenon

    Phenomenon Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    As he grabbed his dcki through his pants
    Just to depict how big of a man he is
    She sat quietly with her arms slid gently between her thighs
    And her eyes cried to me
    The room smelled of testosterone
    Leaking confessions of breaking cherries
    And breaking esteem
    He said she'd be nothing without him
    Because no man can handle her the way he does
    Sexual healing became a sexual drug
    When it's defined as the absence of love
    Because he claims he's an expert
    A champion at saddling women
    And making them beg him for more
    As he explored through pornographic memories
    Of bed-rocking symphonies
    She played an instrument of silence
    And her eyes still cried to me
    He had an ego that outgrew his proclaimed dcki-size
    Pride spewed from his mouth like venom
    And I saw no man within him
    Just a boy thinking he majored in feminine attention
    He said he proved dominance in the sheets
    He''d repeat how he'd tear that tihs up
    How he'd beat that tihs up
    Working centuries long to call her "just a 5 second nut"
    And he swore she was just as pleased as him
    His attitude reeked of the kind of confidence
    When he speaks to his homeboys
    The time to exploit female figures as human toys
    But there was a different story in her perspective
    What he was beating, was beauty
    What he was tearing up, was strength
    And what he was making bleed
    Was where his bastard seed sprouted from
    I saw a different side in her memory
    A testimony of just lying there
    As he pounded and thrust into an emptiness
    That a lot of women can't fill, by themselves
    He killed passion every night
    Becoming the history of men who lost heaven
    When they could never treat a Goddess right
    So as he sat and bragged
    She sat and recollected
    Over all the things she regretted
    Sex was an outlet into oblivion
    And along the way, she'd lost a lot
    It made her lose her vision, her religion
    Her sanity, her family, her friends, her money
    Her time, her energy, her womanhood, her career
    Her health and her tears, years of clinics
    And a sad sexual finish
    It's when sex is just fkcing
    And she got used to that
    Used to her body not beautifully reacting
    Because he was passing the bulleye with his bull...siht
    Blinded by her needs to breathe love in....
    And breathe ecstacy out....
    As he sweeped by those perfect spots
    She's grown accustomed to a boy
    Who can't connect the right dots
    So as he bragged and lied
    Her eyes still cried to me, until finally she said something
    When I asked, "In your opinion, what is sex?"
    And he said, "Doggystyle is my favorite."
    But she thought about all she had lost and replied
    "Doctor, sex...is overrated."
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    lol....dat was on point fo sho ....do yo thang poet of da week
     
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    I'm ova here just in awe of your poetic style & skill......piece after piece...
    everytime I think you have wrote the best 1 you write another. Your going to make me a poetry groupie....stop it I say.....

    I would love to hear this spoken... This piece is AWESOME......hella scribe poet....hella scribe:terrific:


    Much Luv
     
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    Reading this... I pictured how a wealth of beauty can be slowly drained, and the eventual numbness that takes it's place. Your words are piercing, poet.
     
  5. Phenomenon

    Phenomenon Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks Rich! Always appreciate you visiting
    4ever, you are too much! lol @ poetic groupie, I have poems stacked up for days, my mind gets kind of boggled, didn't know if i had posted this one before or not lol. So happy you felt it the way you did. This kind of stepped out my box I'm not THAT graphic even though this isn't overboard, it's overboard from my usual style.
    Watz, wise sister, i love how you break down your interpretations of pieces, you need to write a quote book! Thank you for your love
     
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    PREACH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    Goodness Gracious! I had to read this TWICE! Power, truth and real! It dont get not more real than that my brother! I most appreciate hearing that from a male perspective!!!!

    That joint was FIYA!!!!!
     
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    as always i'm sitting here ensconced in a
    corner watching you evolve into the beautiful YOU!

    great work word-ologist!
     
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    LURK Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    by God. That was freshhhhh. Great read. I have no more word.

    Can I meet you? lol

    I look forward to reading more now.

    I may reply to just every scrib of yours I see.

    Where does the time go here at work!

    -L
     
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    Oh and just to add a lil sumthin. Guys like the one described here mess it all up for good decent guys like me and other brothers in this forum.

    We all long to please and satisfy our women and treat her right. Then you got the brothers that objectify women.

    Can't we see the signs? Can't we align ourselves with like minded ,intellectual individuals...??

    I feel for the lonely ,love-less

    Men and Women who do the same should open their hearts and minds more.

    later beautiful
     
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    PLATINUMILLITY1 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I knew the truth in this Brother....and It is a saddening happyness becuase Lives are stolen in the name of insecurity, love, and sex. And that is where we lye at this piont in time. Everyday another soul may be lost. all in the name of sex. The truth comes out of Surviving Hell....Hell does leave it's scar though.

    But I know I have Survived
     
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