Black Poetry : Sex killed us

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  1. twision

    twision Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    That night
    You remember?
    We crossed a line
    Thinking we were ready
    Leaving mere infatuation
    Walking in desecrated territory
    A meeting of the souls
    Elevated
    (Or de-elevated?)
    Into forbidden passion
    Inside you
    I swam
    Searching for what I already possessed
    A part of you
    That couldn't be touched with physical hands
    We became one body
    In the will of sin
    But two sinners
    In the eyes of God
    Betraying Him
    Betraying each other....
    If I could go back
    I would have just held you instead
    If I could go back
    This relationship would not be dead
    By the hands of sex!
     
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    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    "If" is the smallest word in the dictionary...but has the biggest meaning. Sometimes so many of us find that out, ...after-the-fact...which can't be changed.
    this is a very good script...here's hoping others read this and make more use of the word..."THINK" instead of "IF"
     
  3. poeticly_yours

    poeticly_yours Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I like this a lot. I'm feeling you. I know its a lot of choices I made in life I wish I could just hit the rewind button on and not make the same mistake. I'm feeling this poem.
     
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    Like whoa wit the sequel do that brah
    you are :smokin: :)
     
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    what can l tell a teacher??

    man this is what gets the best of a lot of relationships...
     
  6. twision

    twision Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks for the love once again fam
    It's an honor to share my creativity
    With such creative and loving individuals!

    Queentswana- Very insightful comment. You are so true in what you say! Thank you.

    Poeticly yours- Thank you also for the love. If my life had a rewind button it would constantly need repairing.....one love

    Triniti- Thanks for showing love on both! If I'm smoking it's because the "fam" inspires me...one love


    J'hiah- Teacher to teacher we must break it down to the students. It gets the best of relationships tru dat, but sometimes they can survive....ain't dat right?...Much love 2u my mizza
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Wow...what if...at the right time, sex can be love expressed, at the wrong time, disaster, wonderfully posed.
     
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    :eeek: Where was this a few years back? LOL man this was onpoint! :toast:
     
  9. twision

    twision Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Watz- you're right as usual. Sex is something so powerful
    It's usually mishandled though
    We know what happens when power get in the wrong hands.....

    Caramelpython- To answer your ? I was still finding out what kind of killer sex was...lol....thank you


    PEACE AND LOVE
    twision
     
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    Nita Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    W O W!!!!!

    Twision,
    This truly blessed me because I have so many ifs I wish I could change.
    You have taught us...blessed us..swept us on off our feet with this one.
    Thanks
    Nita
    :heart:
     
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