Black Poetry : Sex killed me

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by twision, Apr 6, 2004.

  1. twision

    twision Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Sex killed me
    The part that really mattered
    Stealing
    My innocence
    My youth
    My one chance at normalcy
    My one chance at seeing
    The world untainted
    Sex killed me
    The part that really mattered
    On an altar
    My manhood
    The sacrifice
    Placing me
    Face to face with evil
    Befriending perversion
    Marrying
    A life of confusion
    Bitterness
    Shame
    Guilt
    Robbing me of self esteem and worth
    *sigh*
    Sex killed me
    I got the wounds to show
    Damaged confidence
    Lack of identity
    Cleverly hidden fear
    And rampant emotions
    Sex killed me
    Sex mocked me
    Sex tainted me
    Sex perverted me
    Sex destroyed me
    Sex imprisoned me
    Sex robbed me
    Sex raped me
    Sex left me for dead!
     
  2. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    wow...very emotional piece...
     
  3. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    very deep emotions in this
    likes the scribe....
    Peace
    Angel
     
  4. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    whoaaaaaaaaaaaaa
    now dat's some deep stuff
    flow on wow !
     
  5. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Many things can lead us down the wrong road, deeply written and understood.
     
  6. Nita

    Nita Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    yes

    Very emotional.
    It destroyed me too...I wish I had waited until marriage, that was the way it was meant to be.
    Nice drop twision
     
  7. triniti424

    triniti424 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    My brotha I must offer respect to you for this piece/peace
    It was REAL and I LOVED it :bowdown:
     
  8. twision

    twision Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I was a tad hesitant about posting this one.
    Normally I'm a very private person, but lately
    I'm learning I'm not the only one in a LOT of situations.
    This is for me, and this is for you(to whom it may concern)

    PEACE AND LOVE
    twision
     
  9. Bluewater

    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    gosh this is deep
    flow on
    feeling you
    Peace
    BlueWater:heart:
     
  10. thatgirl74

    thatgirl74 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    WOW!!!
    Twision that piece was very emotional.
    Very , Very, ..
    Look it was just very good.
     
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