Black Poetry : ...Sex Don't Heal A [email protected] Thing...

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  1. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this is actually a song and a poem, but i just posted it as the poem...enjoy!

    Sex don’t heal everything
    Even through the darkest dreams and tragedies
    Sex don’t heal anything
    But it sometimes heals fast and temporarily

    The greater the sex
    The more it hurts
    The greater pain
    The more you yearn
    The more that you moan
    The more you crash down
    And all that you know
    brings you underground

    Sex don’t heal everything
    Even when they touch you in that special way
    Sex don’t heal nothin’ at all
    Cuz I’ve tried to make it take all my pain away

    For all of those fights
    That bruised me up inside
    For all of those things
    I said but didn’t like
    Somehow I found
    him connected in me
    And for a split second
    It healed everything

    But I know sex don’t heal no [email protected] thing
    You think it does, til you cry out of desperation
    Sex don’t heal nothing at all
    The better it feels, the more you are gonna fall

    Each tear represents
    The pleasure that I feel
    Each time I grip
    I’m beggin’ him to feel
    I want him to know
    That this don’t make it better
    All I want is for us to be together

    again….

    again….

    again…..

    again…

    Sex don’t heal anything…

    no…
     
  2. CarrieMonet

    CarrieMonet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I swear that this is so deep. A message that should be screamed in the school yards. Great poem!!
     
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    great poem...that is so true. Sex isn't the solution.
     
  4. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks for the comments...i wrote this from experience...glad u all liked it:)
     
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    Monetary going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    LovelyGoldenOne

    "Truer words have never been spoken."

    You have represented that situation perfectly. Sometimes, sex is the only thing that keeps a person around when everything else is telling you RUNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNN FOOLLLLLLLLL RUNNNNNNNNNN. smh

    :thanks: for keeping it real and sharing your wisdom with us.

    :toast:
     
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    Definitely speaking truth sis. It's only a temporary fix, if that. Flowed right on target.
     
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    monad.poetress Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    The greater the sex
    The more it hurts

    .....Nothin' but the truth
    Cause once the sex is over then you gotta face realtiy

    Great poem :huh:


    ****Monad.poetress
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    i hear ya here so true so true most def not the answer
    flow on
     
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    Feelin you on this one, sex use to be my friend, so I thought, we wined and dined even had nachos and dip. But after everything was gone I still had the problem I started with. Girl, were you there? You put this down like you were Great! Great! Great! Piece. Flow on!
     
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    This was a great informative piece....I wouldn't really know from experience but i'll take ya word for it.
     
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