Black Poetry : sex cycles

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by cypher, Jun 3, 2003.

  1. cypher

    cypher Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    as a young boy i was always told
    that to juice the girls felt like gold
    didnt matter if i was only ten
    just as long as i could get in
    my boys always talkin bot who they hit
    runnin trains on the girls whose legs stayed split
    eventhough i knew some was lying on they d*ck
    hell im sure at the time they had never seen a ****
    like a badge of courage they would brag and boast
    too ashamed to admit that sex was never an issue
    with the girl they liked most
    to be a superhoe was title of worth
    not caring if the result is another teen birth
    no men to say show respect honor commitment
    just try to get as much p*ssy as you can
    before they start showin resentment
    now we have the script flipped a bit
    when the young sistas are becoming more promiscuous
    when the legs are being split just to say
    im a playa and playaz get down that way
    babies havin babies and cant teach them ****
    so many lives destroyed by a sad cycle that seems infinite
    so many kids that cant see their own beauty
    so they resort to slangin d*ck and backin it up wit they booty
    never knowing the truth of intimacies roots
    these kids are oly concerned with knockin da boots
    instead of takin time to express love and they feelings
    so many settle for material love and some sexual healing
    where do we stop this sad cycle of immature sex
    i hope its soon cuz the idea of my seeds havin seeds
    too young has got me vexed:maddd:


    hey we have to let the babies the know that what feels good may not always be good for them yall....
     
  2. SwtT

    SwtT Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    C, I with you b/c im soo feelin it.....got those kinda issues ragning at home front over here
     
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    Speak on it!
    Not that I'm one to talk(not the best past)
    but if you look at society today
    our whole society is geared to
    such beliefs and we saturate everything
    with it from t.v. to radio, to internet, to
    ads, to casual conversations to the club(oh my god,
    the club...)
    to virtually every aspect of society.
    The sad thing about it is, no one really
    seems to be connecting the causes to the problems.
    I'm glad you are letting your poetic voice be heard!
    Peace to ya!
     
  4. 1poetsought

    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Getting old got me sold
    Close your legs,
    Save your soul!

    1poetsought ~ Nice truth, Cypher! :toast:
     
  5. cypher

    cypher Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanx for da reads yo....swtT i was born and raised in the chi and ive been a witness to this behavior all my life....right on skrybe it has become an accepted part of our society so its not viewed as something we need to change...yeah poet we gotta lot of soul savin to do ya know....its a shame......:censored: :censored:
     
  6. Jyntlbreez

    Jyntlbreez Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    cypher, what you say is sad but true. And in this age where the media makes the activity of rampant "free-sex" glamourous, it's very difficult to compete against, but we must continually instill in our children the knowledge of their self-worth! Give them a foundation to draw upon, when they become exposed to these issues

    Great flow!
     
  7. NADIA*BINTA

    NADIA*BINTA Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    it is a vicious cycle... that has the masses caught up in its whirlwind... i really felt this piece...

    peace
     
  8. cypher

    cypher Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanx breez a strong foundation is what we need to mold our young black seeds...u right nadia it is the worldswind that so many are caught up in....
     
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    I must say that this is horrible. Not your verse, but the reality of it. Just last week, my 14 year old cousin came to my house and told me got a girl pregnant and she's 5 months along. I was really REALLY upset by the news, but his grandmother who is my aunt said, "Awwww, that's gonna make me a great-grandmother. Wait to I tell everybody." (a great grandmother at 48, my great grandmother was 70 when i was born). Anyway, I was disgusted and I let him know I was. I felt this poem to the heart cause my younger cousin is sooo dear to me and I hope this doesn't slow his life down, but it's going to be hard.
     
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    Truer words have neva been spoken I cant stand the thought of it but I'm glad SOMEBODY is speakin up on it.
     
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