Black Poetry : ...Sex Appeal...

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by LovelyGoldenOne, Jul 29, 2003.

  1. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I can’t help myself
    I don’t see no one else
    As I study this man
    The one I want as MY man
    He’s the epitome of sexy
    I wonder how he can sex me
    In the middle of the night
    As we’re entangled in restless fight
    I look around and see that
    I’m not the only one with these facts
    If you only knew baby
    The way you could drive girls crazy

    You got this sensuality about you
    That just makes me say ooooo!…ooooo!…
    Makes me a little wet below
    And I just thought you should know
    Oh, I need to move a little a closer
    So that you can notice my upholster
    And maybe make contact with me
    And not just physically

    I wanna go inside your head and see
    All the ways you intellectually think
    If you have more on your mind than just sex
    And if you wanna take the relationship step
    Now baby, now baby, now baby, plead with me
    Cuz I gotta let you know that I’m here to please
    I wanna sex you up and hold on so tight
    As our bodies connect for hours intertwined

    So after you have heard all this
    Tell me what you think of a kiss
    How about you take me home
    So your home becomes my own
    Cuz you got that sex appeal
    That makes my head start to fill
    With daydreams and mental dreams
    You and me and some whipped cream……………

    !!!!D*mn!!!!

    But uh-anyway…
    That’s for another day……
    …………where was I?
    Oh yeah, at the part where i…..

    Need to get back to the flow
    Cuz baby boy I just need to let you know
    That my lust for you is so d*mn badly
    I gotta have you mentally and sexually
    Cuz you got this certain sex appeal
    I wonder how bein’ underneath you would feel?
     
  2. eternal

    eternal Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    U got skillz!!! Hot!!!(FANNING) I feel ya!!
    Tight!!
    E
     
  3. Alizentang

    Alizentang Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :hot:Whoa!! Where did this come from:hot: :laugh:

    This was really really good and something different coming from you.
    LOVING IT!!!

    Much Love
    :heart:Alize:heart:
     
  4. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    lol, thanks eternal:D

    alizentang....this is how i used to write....and i decided to just try out some new things...thanks girl!
     
  5. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i hope this piece isn't unusual to anybody, since this is coming from me...based on my writings lately....i just needed to write somethin' fun...to escape all the death and dark writing....hope u liked it!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    ummmm! i wish i was in his shoes
    dis was hot and fancy ya showing the
    other side of ya pen i love dat !
    wow!
    if it was me that had u in a up row i would
    shhhhhh! let me hush .........lol
    this was tyteeeeeee heat u bringing
     
  7. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    lol, rich ur too much:), but i love u anyway:)....thanks
     
  8. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    anymore inputs?
     
  9. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    guess nobody else wants to read it....:(
     
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    Awwwwww gurl, I know I'm young but I want to give my opinion too. Well, I think that was the most beautifuliest thing I ever had the pleasure of reading. I like your style. This was so soulful. Man, what eles can I say but I loved it.

    Much Love,
    Foxy................
     
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