Black Poetry : SEX … WITH A WOMAN

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  1. garlicsalt99

    garlicsalt99 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    SEX … WITH A WOMAN

    I’ve been around a while and interacted with females on different levels
    At stages that are as noticeable as the surface of designer glass and its bevels
    With a range of the cordial to the utmost hostile and rude
    In my younger days, there was no discrimination or the women that I pursued
    But one day I thought it through, as to what I like and what does me good
    What has me thinking for days on end from actions easily understood
    That has me feeling it in my abdomen seven days from the start
    That has me rethinking the act of love making as an art
    Apart from intercourse and a mindless f%ck, there has to be a difference
    In the way the fore and after-play is done … or rather, written in a sentence
    I’d stop and ponder as some would play with themselves and self-squish
    I stopped and noticed a marked difference between the selfless and the selfish
    I’ve come to realize that there is more to pleasure than just physical maturity
    There is encouragement, advocacy, endorsement, and assurety
    There is more to intercourse than a saying and a summon
    There is sex with a girlish gown-up, and then there is sex … with a woman

    Written by: K-JiO
    © 2008

    Read the entire piece at http://www.theblackpoetrycafeonline.com/sex-with-a-woman-t2361.html
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Like a sculptor with a chisel you crafted your words just so, a woman gives of her whole self, just because. Whew...
     
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    Like a master artist paints his masterpiece, this was crafted with careful precison that showed in its particular verbal strokes and overall compostition. Well done my brother.
     
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    I probably should have taken an aspirin before I read that one! LOL

    I think you layed it out pretty plainly what its like to be with a REAL WOMAN!

    As usual, you have left your fans very satisfied! Excellent piece poet!
     
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    wow..... spoken like a true king...

    an orgasm last an
    insignificant amout of time
    but a woman's love is ageless
    for we were magically designed
    the electricity between two twin souls
    united in the heat
    for love sweet love is not like lust
    when mind body and soul all meet
    for some may never feel the real
    they don't know where to look
    but if you ask any real woman
    she can tell you......... because we wrote the book

    YOUR FLOW IS OFF THE HOOK!!!!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    woooweeee look out now ya burning a big fire here
     
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    garlicsalt99 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you all

    watzinaname: a good sculptor appreciates those who can appreciate his finished artwork :)

    asimplepoet: a good artist always appreciates those who can really enjoy a good painting

    LoveDestiny: To be with a real woman, instead of a girl trapped in a womans body ... is priceless :)

    Miss Lady: you're so write. As much emphasis as is placed on sex, the end result only lasts but for a moment [at best] There has to be something more in order to appreciate a woman. If sex is all there is, then that's not much to go on, no matter how good it is :)

    $RICH$: If I ever do a book signing, I'm going to hire you as my hype man ... lol


    Thank you all for taking the time to read. Stay tuned ... you know there is more to come
     
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