Black Poetry : Severity

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Soullyricist, Aug 1, 2003.

  1. Soullyricist

    Soullyricist Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    The severity of the situation is about a negative ten
    Then again I can understand your frustration because I once wore the
    New love “don’t **** with my man” shoes
    It was something I couldn’t help but do when she did everything but listen to you
    Like she couldn’t understand or fathom your reasons for being so blunt about carrying on any sort of consultation
    I got so hot I could have sworn the devil had levitated me to hell cause I wanted to cause her pain.
    And now as I think about it I find it rather interesting
    My ex did me in a wrong kind of way that shouldn’t even exist yet I never dreamed of his face meeting my clinched fist…but your ex, that little *****
    Now that was some how different
    But I don’t want to gyrate the truth or corrupt your understanding
    I hated what he did
    I despised every second of his confused contorted actions
    After my initial reaction which was
    Why?
    Now healed I can laugh at his half assed attempts to get back with me
    And as much as I want to tell you not to mind the non severity of the situation I can understand and respect your frustration.
    He is but a mere speck in my past that allowed me to introduce my self to you and create our situation
    Our all love passionate obsessive situation
    So trust me luv
    The severity of the situation is bellow a negative ten
    Don’t mind his weak *** efforts
    Because I can handle not dealing with him

    © Tawanda Roberson
     
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    Sweet baby_face Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I felt like I just lived that. That was so on point
     
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    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Communication is a good thing! You promote confidence and trust in this wondrous poem.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    indeed i agree
    u pose wisdom within
    flow head !!