Quiet Poetry Lounge : Severing Thoughts

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by blakverb, Jul 5, 2001.

  1. blakverb

    blakverb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Got a sharp knife now
    and trying to sever these
    thoughts of you

    I never tried to
    distance myself from
    a good thing until now

    Sometimes too good
    is no good...unless it's
    a glass of Lemonade
    on a hot Phoenix day

    Got a sharp knife now
    gotta dissect these visions
    of you from my mental
    databanks even though
    it might leave my heart broke

    Your visions have/had/still got
    me wondering about things
    I don't/shouldn't/won't no more
    want to ponder on any more

    I never wanted to decrease my
    happiness by subtraction [or
    would it increase my happiness
    by subtraction] these types
    of thoughts are jerking at my limbs
    and my tendons are about
    to give

    so I got a sharp knife now
    to edit you from my mind.

    (c)2001 blakverb
     
  2. j'hiah

    j'hiah Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this is good...

    i know peeps who are still using dull knives for iron thoughts...
    again this was on point....

    nfinitely
    from the garden.....
     
  3. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    MAN

    MAKE ME THINK ABOUT
    THE ONE'SWHO USED
    A BUTTER KNIFE
    U SAID A MOUTH FULL
    FEELING DES !!!:heart:
     
  4. GA_Sunshyne

    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    My RoYaL BLaKnEsS....


    ****, Boo...

    for your sake... i hope it works.

    this was magnificent-ly scribed...
    but that's nothing new for you!! :)

    OneLuv.
    Queen Ga~:)
     
  5. blakverb

    blakverb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    GA, $$RICH$$, j'hiah

    2 ya'll I send mad thanks, appreciation, and adoration. It's because of you, your scribes and your vibes that keep me...trying to keep up.

    blak
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