Black Poetry : Seven

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by candeesweet, Sep 20, 2012.

  1. candeesweet

    candeesweet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    When I arrive
    At a place of stand by
    I can only imagine
    In a dreamed state
    How it really feels to be alive
    Not realizing who knows
    And what they know for
    Stepping in fatigued
    From the recipe of discovering things
    Being the first every second
    How can it be the same on the minute
    When the silent scene hits me and I sleep
    Life is no longer turbulent
    I'm assured to end up in the convection
    of never being the same after recluding
    the new things I dreamed would
    come upon through age & demitry.
     
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    Perfection Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    truly feeling this part...thanks for sharing.
     
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    Sis, you know I'm feeling this piece.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    wow...felt every verse line and word deep
     
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