Black Poetry : Seven Inches...

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  1. IfUComeSoftly

    IfUComeSoftly Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Seven inches…
    Was all I took
    I did it because I
    Needed a change
    I did it because I
    Didn’t see beauty
    I did it because
    I was tired of the norm
    I did it because
    It was mine to give
    I did it because
    It was mine to take
    I did it because
    I wanted to do it
    I did it because
    It really isn’t a big deal
    I did not know
    Seven inches of
    Steel could do this
    To us and to you
    I did not try to hide
    Or to act as if it
    Were not so.
    You always want
    Me to try something
    Different so I tried
    Someone different
    I didn’t think that
    Seven inches of
    Steel could do this to us
    I wanted freedom
    But I didn't want
    To be free of you
    ****… it’s just
    Seven inches…
    Of hair!!!!
     
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    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Girl, ..I took it where you wasn't even going ..smh
    that was real cute...got my attention ..lol
     
  3. IfUComeSoftly

    IfUComeSoftly Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    and i almost replied that way as well... lol

    i know... i know... i meant to do it... lol
    but to tell you the truth... i feel a relief since I have a lot less hair... lol
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    U did it because
    and u did it for a change

    and u surely did it , had my mind u know where
    yep u did it ........tyte spin
     
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    choclatangel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    uh oh you were taking my mind to the gutter for a minute there. You did it for you and that's wat matters :)
     
  6. IfUComeSoftly

    IfUComeSoftly Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    now i'ma take it there... i dont' think seven inches :ref: would suffice... lol...

    and on a sunday... i need help...
     
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    ...of hair, lol. Yes, I was sort of wondering too, your words wonderfully led us astray. The only inkling I had that all wasn't what it seemed was the fact that you said "seven" inches. But you spoke to that in the above post, lol. Very much enjoyed.
     
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    SmoovVerbiage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This is cute...

    and also based on the replies along with mine,
    proves, not only men have a one track mind. :)

    Yes, some men are really into hair, just ask him
    to hold on a bit... it does grow back.


    cute scribe


    SmoovV
    aka cocobutterskyn
     
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    I did not know
    Seven inches of
    Steel could do this
    To us and to you


    lol...u played that off lovely....;)
    great poem poet...

    one love
    khasm
     
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