Quiet Poetry Lounge : Serenity

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Desert Storm, Nov 19, 2005.

  1. Desert Storm

    Desert Storm Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Indefinately
    Pleasently
    Do I appreciate
    So heavenly
    I can openly precipitate
    The thoughts of the day that rearrange my mind's eye
    The reason in the beginning
    Changing the seasons
    Changing my life
    Familiar serenity
    I hear peace reply
    ...
     
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    nevar Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i felt serenity when i read it. flow on desert storm.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    feeling the depth of serenity.
    beautiful scribe DS
     
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    Emotionally
    Potentially
    Guiding the light through the darkness
    The sharp beat knocks me unconscious
    The music hints of another day
    The beginning of the seasons
    Overcast the shadows of the day
    Serenity
    I hear peace reply

    Well spoken poet
     
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    Desert Storm Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    well thanks evr'body! ha ha ha well tantrum you flow 'head now! ha ha ha...God is definately changing the seasons surely He IS. and it's all for a reason. Surely He is and I can't lie I feel Jesus up in HERE. He's the reason why I know a love of peace and joy never to fear.
    Thanks yall ... feeling the blessings flowin up and down and all arround lol. thanks evr'body!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    yes indeed DS.........
     
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