Black Poetry : SeRenDIpiTy

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by GA_Sunshyne, Oct 1, 2001.

  1. GA_Sunshyne

    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I listened… intent-ly as he
    spit… what I initial-ly thought
    was his “game”… to me…
    you know… He said things
    like… “me & my divine mate
    will met divine-ly… at the
    divine tyme… that has already
    been set aside by a Higher Being”
    (I smile now… remembering) :)
    I started thinking… this brotha is
    so wise… sitting here… permitting
    his soulful eyes to devour myne
    & at the same tyme…
    unknowing-ly reading my mind
    (That’s when our souls entwined)
    ‘cause you see… I also believe in
    karma… kismet… providence…
    & I’m 100% sure of this—
    …my growth experiences &
    life lessons were preparing me
    for the day… when He&I would
    meet… face-to-face… he touched
    a place… in my soul… that had
    been “on hold” before he arrived
    & from the start… my heart…
    began to beat different-ly
    (I could feel him feelin’me)
    so… I’m glad that… instead of
    aimless-ly searching… my tyme
    was spent wise-ly… prayerful-ly
    looking internal-ly for that place
    that is divine Love&Peace
    I was… making certain that I
    was the best me… I could be…
    in preparation for the immaculate
    unveil-ing of… Mr Destiny… & just
    as fate would have it…
    …He ultimate-ly found Me.



    ©SunShyneOrygynals 2001, all rights reserved
     
  2. epiphany

    epiphany Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Beautiful........Sunshyne

    Can't find him, unless you find yourself.......inspirational poem.

    Epiphany :heart:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    O' my sunshyne blue sky

    how beautiful and touching u made me feel
    dis morning gurl i just love dem rays u spitting out!!
    thank u .................:heart: :kiss:
     
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    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    E-Pip. :) thank you for showing a sistah some love
    on this one!! You are appreciated... glad you could dig it!

    $$RICH-NE$$. have i told you lately how
    beautiful You are?? :) thanks for taking the tyme
    from your busy flyght schedule show luv!
     
  5. Natasha

    Natasha Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Simply ....Divine !!!

    girl this was awesome ! and so full of truth .......
    wonderful !:toast:
     
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    UbZoRbShUn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Sunny

    I have been warmed by ya rays sis. Preciate it.



    One
     
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    blakverb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    GA,

    That's it!!! I am breaking all of my pencils, tossing out all my pens, and burning all my pieces!!! I don't know what it is,but, you went and outdone yourself...This here is just....CLASSIC................
    giving this a "10" would discredit the piece, I'll just say..........CD $12.99, stealth bomber $1 billion dollars, satellite $billions, this piece here...................

    PRICELESS (Bill gates can't even afford this)

    verb


    :hot:
     
  8. GA_Sunshyne

    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Nat. where da hell you been?! :) thanks for
    takin' the tyme to come in on this one.

    ZorbShun. no need to thank me... i am warmed
    by your scribes on any given day!! know this!! :)

    M.R.B. eva seen a BlakGurl blush? :lol: you know
    how much i appreciate your poetic opinion... so...
    thank You!! :heart:
     
  9. Legendof_1_Spirit

    Legendof_1_Spirit Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Smooth rhythm...

    ...>fades in>

    and the words you weave are a joy to read...very soulful and heartfelt.
    Also intimate and personal, with an intensity that grabs the mind and whispers to the heart. I could almost hear your voice inside my head speaking the words as I read them.

    Excellent spoken word piece.

    Keep the words moving and thanks for the inspiration.

    <fades out<...
     
  10. GA_Sunshyne

    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Legend. 1st... where have you been??!! you
    should come home more often, you know? :) 2nd...
    ..."with an intensity that grabs the mind and whispers
    to the heart." ???... Whoa! that was a beautiful thing
    to say! so wheneva you wanna hear this spoken...
    just let me know! Really. thanks for the read!