Quiet Poetry Lounge : SEPTEMBER RAIN

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Sierra, Jun 21, 2003.

  1. Sierra

    Sierra Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    September rain
    falling upon
    my face.

    I close
    my eyes
    and succumb
    to it's grace.

    I allow it
    to baptize
    my skin.

    I come
    alive
    under
    it's spray
    of rain,
    thin.

    I feel
    so fine.
    I don't
    even want
    to whine.

    I open
    my mouth
    and drink in
    an edge of
    it's fine
    savory wine.

    My clothes
    are soaked
    through and
    through.

    The curl
    of my hair
    is wet and
    matted down.

    But it doesn't
    bother me,
    the September rain,
    not at all today!
     
  2. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    this was very awesome rain flow
    let the drops drip !
     
  3. angelicsage

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    Silken flowetry just pouring down the page. Smooth piece.
     
  4. Sierra

    Sierra Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hey Rich,

    I cherish these kind remarks!!

    All my love to you!!

    ~Sierra~:heart:
     
  5. Sierra

    Sierra Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hi Angelicsage, :wave:

    You are so sweet and kind to say this about my poem!!

    All my best to you!!

    ~Sierra~:heart:
     
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    This is beautiful Sierra
    Peace
     
  7. Sierra

    Sierra Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hi Bluewater,

    Your kind words bring me great elation!!

    Peace to you as well!!

    ~Sierra~ :heart:
     
  8. PlayWitItPimp05

    PlayWitItPimp05 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This is simply beautiful! And oh so very natural!!!

    Keep on keepin on!!!

    :heart: :heart: PLAY :heart: :heart:
     
  9. Sierra

    Sierra Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hi Play, :wave:

    I am so happy you liked my poem!!

    Being one with nature relaxes the soul!!

    :thanks: for the :read:

    ~Sierra~:heart:
     
  10. alyce

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    you have captured it so well, Poetess. this is beautifully expressed...and I felt it with all my senses....that's peace!

    thank you

    alyce
     
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