Black Poetry : Separation

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  1. Kori

    Kori Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Though my love for you is far from gone,
    Our romantic unity is over.
    I've been hurt countless times,
    But I can't release my daydreams of you
    The way you laugh
    As a breeze through my hair
    ...refreshing
    A glimpse of our smile still brightens my day...
    Though, now, that smile is warranted by another
    Someone obviously more worthy than I.
    I still hear your voice, infrequently bringing my joy.
    But, at comprehension, I am sickened by your words.
    We must only be friends!?
    I must listen to the words of your lips,
    But never kiss them?
    Stare in the awe at the satin of your skin,
    But never caress?
    How could you be so cruely loving?
    Allowing me to love you and denying me simultaneously.
    Forbidding me to swim,
    When, in love, I am so deep.
    You're trying hard to kill my soul
    ...and you're so close to succeeding.
     
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    One for The Gripper, TIGHT as hell!
     
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    that's just how it is sometimes, we try to keep our :yo: but they :court: our :heart: and we :luvv: them regardless, that is truly some deep love and you had me :idea: about this one i'm re- :read: it and finding it very down to earth or should i say down to me :lol: keep it coming poet.........continue..............one :heart:
     
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    THIS IS TIGHT, JUST DONT GO INSANE OVER HIM
     
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    *singing* We can't be friends... cuz I'm still in love... with yooooo-oooouuuuuuu.... Tight! It's always hard to talk to someone you've been intimate with. Good scribe. More! More!
     
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    Monetary going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    Kori

    That's tough...but the best thing is just to move on. Occupy your mind with something else. Reminiscing will keep you in that state of euphoria over that person.

    Nice scribe, Scribe.

    :thanks: for sharing your situation with us.

    :toast:
     
  7. Kori

    Kori Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks Monetary. Im definitely trying, but he wasn't to like call me and talk to me...why do guys do that ****.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    feeling da deep emotions flowing in this tyte truthful drop
    relax and let go move forward from da myth of him ........
     
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    i feel u on this one....
     
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    this was heart wrenching...
    the pain of love in this piece
    was so compelling...
    you could feel it in every word
    best wishes to you poet
    in learning the lesson
    that love teaches and
    a quick healing and recovery...
    and new roads to new beginnings...

    Feeling this peace! Loved it! :spinstar:
     
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