Black Poetry : Separation of Luv

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  1. 4EVERLUV

    4EVERLUV Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I'm way over here and you're way over there
    And my heart can't seem to bear this Separation of Luv
    My mornings are starting to feel the emptiness
    the absence of your tender kiss

    The urge to want to cook your favorite breakfast
    The need to see that smile on your face
    when I open the bedroom door
    With those eggs and bacon on the plate
    you layn’ there just barely awake
    with that expression of luv and appreciation
    in your eyes cuz you know your baby
    Always tries to make you feel like a King
    and after breakfast we create the steam

    I'm way over here and you're way over there
    And my heart can't seem to bear this Separation of Luv
    Your sexy phone calls are starting to drive me up the wall
    The sound of your voice use to be all I needed to be ok
    But now they tease me like na-na-na boo-boo
    This is what Im gonna do to you when I come home

    Do you have any idea how badly
    I want to jump through the phone
    so you can make good
    On your promises of sighs and moans

    I am way over here and you're way over there
    And my heart can't seem to bear this Separation of Luv
    Work keeps me busy all through the day
    But then I have those moments, those thoughts of you
    I go from happy to sad and blue to happy and sad blue
    Over and over all through out the day cuz thinking of
    You and your luv makes me feel that way

    Happy when I think of the all the laughter and fun we’ve shared
    Sad and Blue when I think of how long its been
    since I’ve last laid eyes on you

    Embraced you
    Kissed you
    And to tell you the truth

    If this goes on much longer I’m booking a flight
    I'm tryn' to be patient
    but too much pressure will burst any pipe
    And I cant help it
    I can't take too many more
    Or these unbearable days and nights

    I know I’m way over here you're way over there
    This Separation of Luv has got me buggn’
    Beyond anything and I can't compare it to nothin'
    Cuz baby I need your luvin’
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Oh my my my
    u ova there wanting and awaiting
    feelin this deep separation
    buggin from the love at hand
    he must be one hella man .

    If somebody could feel this way about me i would make the separation less !
     
  3. queentswana

    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I know the feeling so well..but the wait, somehow has it's worth.
    *When you get to the end of your rope...tie a knot in it...and hang on*
    He also knows the pure un-cut :spinstar: Diamond :spinstar: he has waiting for him.
    Awesome piece 4EVER...well written.
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    That waiting, and wanting, can surely pull at a person's heartstrings, and you fully captured that feeling here. Enjoyed this write.
     
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    4EVERLUV Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    $$RICH$$:
    Yes, I was having a moment. But I'm good now.
    Thanks for the visit.


    queentswana:
    Thank you so much sista queen. Your words give
    me strenghth and encouragment. I have been having some trouble
    coping with the situation but Im good now. Your too sweet.


    Sista watz:
    Thank you so much for the kinds words and visit.
    And yes, my strings felt like they were going to break
    for a moment there. But I got it together.
    Im straight now.


    Much Luv to you all
     
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