Black Poetry : Sentimental

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by blackfox, Feb 27, 2002.

  1. blackfox

    blackfox Active Member MEMBER

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    nostalgia stirs memories
    countless options only in installments
    caught between dreams sands of time drift
    in hourglass visions of familiar moments
    that haunt meaning still waters rest under
    bridges never crossed love forever lost
    personal journeys ending at fork roads
    bittersweet is life to bask in joy and pain

    blackfox
     
  2. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    blackfox ......so often we feel this way at some point in life
    yet we continue to move forward to a better love a better
    place so many just come up short.....
     
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    blackfox Active Member MEMBER

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    Yo Rich!

    Thanks Man
     
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    LISTERSCRIBIN' Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i really like this piece and ma royal richness is ryght. continue to bless us with your scribes...i'll be watchin'.
     
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    Thanks for the acknowledgement Listerscribin
     
  6. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I'm relating to every line in this entire piece...
    You paint a very good picture with words poet!
    Keep them comin'!

    :) N2
     
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