Black Poetry : Sentimental Haiku (I've been inspired to try it)

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  1. GA_Sunshyne

    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    lying unadorned
    in your sweet on-time embrace
    this is my heaven
     
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    LISTERSCRIBIN' Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    gurl, great job at the haiku. talented...you are.
     
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    this piece is on point
    got me jonesin' for the next
    kiss me with your scribe

    GA- you know you have skillz right?
    well ****...you do!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    GURL DES BE TOO TYGHT
    U TOOK ME IN LIKE THAT!
    I MUST STAY IN YO LIGHT
    IN THE BLUE HEAVENS
     
  5. GA_Sunshyne

    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Lister. Verb. $$Rich. thanks for the love on my 1st attempt at Haiku. i was so overwhelmed by the last one Verb posted that i wanted to try it... it turned out pretty good, huh? :) thanks again!!

    :heart:...
    SunShyne~
     
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    Well...

    ...you had on hell of an inspiration, sis. Definitely, feelin' this sensuality in haiku form... :shades:
     
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    Looks great sis'

    I see the family done caught on to the Haiku vibe up in here!
     
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    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    3 Queens....

    Maple.N2.Zorbshun. thank you sweeties! i am really
    honored by your response to this... yes Z. it is my 1st
    attempt at haiku. i really didn't expect to get as many
    replies as i did! a million thanks you guys!! :):):):)
     
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    Elayne...

    if only i could acquire your brilliance thru osmosis...

    tyte*wurk

    sean.
     
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    Nice

    and sweet to the taste....
     
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