Black Poetry : Sentimental Haiku (I've been inspired to try it)

[GA_Sunshyne]

lying unadorned
in your sweet on-time embrace
this is my heaven

 

[LISTERSCRIBIN']

gurl, great job at the haiku. talented...you are.

 

[blakverb]

this piece is on point
got me jonesin' for the next
kiss me with your scribe

GA- you know you have skillz right?
well ****...you do!

 

[$$RICH$$]

GURL DES BE TOO TYGHT
U TOOK ME IN LIKE THAT!
I MUST STAY IN YO LIGHT
IN THE BLUE HEAVENS

 

[GA_Sunshyne]

Lister. Verb. $$Rich. thanks for the love on my 1st attempt at Haiku. i was so overwhelmed by the last one Verb posted that i wanted to try it... it turned out pretty good, huh? thanks again!!

...
SunShyne~