Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by GA_Sunshyne, Apr 25, 2001.
in your sweet on-time embrace
this is my heaven
gurl, great job at the haiku. talented...you are.
this piece is on point
got me jonesin' for the next
kiss me with your scribe
GA- you know you have skillz right?
well ****...you do!
GURL DES BE TOO TYGHT
U TOOK ME IN LIKE THAT!
I MUST STAY IN YO LIGHT
IN THE BLUE HEAVENS
Lister. Verb. $$Rich. thanks for the love on my 1st attempt at Haiku. i was so overwhelmed by the last one Verb posted that i wanted to try it... it turned out pretty good, huh? thanks again!!
...you had on hell of an inspiration, sis. Definitely, feelin' this sensuality in haiku form... :shades:
Looks great sis'
I see the family done caught on to the Haiku vibe up in here!
Maple.N2.Zorbshun. thank you sweeties! i am really
honored by your response to this... yes Z. it is my 1st
attempt at haiku. i really didn't expect to get as many
replies as i did! a million thanks you guys!!
if only i could acquire your brilliance thru osmosis...
and sweet to the taste....
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