Black Poetry : Sensuality Returned

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  1. choclatangel

    choclatangel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    It's 5:30 P.M.
    It's been a long day
    But I'm thinking of you
    As I run my bath water
    Looking once at the phone
    I sashay to the bathroom
    Letting my silky peach robe
    Slip to the floor on the way
    I lift my mocha colored leg
    and let my foot slowly sink
    to the bottom of the tub
    the peaches and cream complexion
    of my breast is the last
    to disappear under the cover of bubbles
    As I soak away the stress
    Letting the smooth R&B sounds of
    New Edition, R. Kelly, and Jon B.
    Massage my ears
    I close my eyes to the candle light
    and inhale the light rose scent
    that has invaded my bathroom
    If only you could be here
    you would be right beside me
    Caressing me, touching me, loving me
    But instead I'm sitting here missing you
    I decide to get out of the tub
    Body still dripping wet, started to let a tear fall
    Then thought better of it
    Just as I reached for my shea butter lotion
    I hear your deep voice, "Let me help you with that"
    Didn't even hear you come in
    Yet you've stripped down to your bare chocolate skin
    Gently massaging oils deep into my skin
    I can do nothing but hold onto the sink
    And stare at your reflection in the mirror
    Eyes meet eyes and you carry me to the bed
    Instead of tuning my body and getting down to buisness
    You just hold and let me listen to the beating of your heart
    And thats how we fell to rest your arms holding me to your chest.
     
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    whewwwwwwwww!!! Da night of caressin sweet under the comfort of he
    this was sensually tamed and soft.........keep doing it up ............................
     
  3. NapturallyYours

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    Girl, this sounds like the dream i had last night! Great write!
     
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    choclatangel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks brother Rich, and sister Napturally your dream is my reality, wait until you find THAT one.
     
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    my my my got rich all hot and bothered. im suprised he didnt touch it. hot write gurl on fireya.
     
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    Girl, that love scene reminds me of the couple in my avatar (my fantasy):blush:. Excellent, vibrant write chocolate angel. Flow on Missy.

    :massage:

    :picture:
     
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