Black Poetry : Sensitive to Love

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  1. GQ

    GQ Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Would you mind
    if I told you how
    sensitive
    I am when it
    it comes to loving you?

    Because I am strong yet
    emotionally delicate
    when I think of how
    vulnerable and defenseless
    I am regarding feelings I feel,
    I subconsciously
    become reactive to love
    &
    I forget what inhibitions are
    and lavish my kewl discretions
    deep within you
    to optimize both our
    sensitive
    moods


    While I consciously touch
    my smiling heart as I think about
    happiness being you, I remember
    what your soft femininity means to me
    &
    I feed on the need to be hopelessly
    caught up in your mental
    attractiveness that enables me
    to love you unconditionally

    After I willingly commit to all
    that is near and dear to your
    heart, and yes, my own,
    I know that I’ll never
    find another love like yours;
    for there is none better
    &
    I lovingly become receptive to
    your every conceded desire
    that sustains of my weakness
    to be as
    sensitive
    as my
    "hungry for love"
    soul
    gladly allows

    ©GQINC2K2
     
  2. Derrick Jay

    Derrick Jay Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    need that sen-si-tiv-ity...i can dig this!
    G.enuine Q.uality!

    One,
    Derrick Jay
     
  3. GA_Sunshyne

    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    BigHead.


    i ain't g'on keep tellin' you 'bout this heah!!

    dayum... well... it's more like daaaayyuuum!!

    i was feelin' alla this. your ability to sweet-ly
    romance words... is flawless-ly continuous. :)

    :heart:
    SB (HA!)
     
  4. deepgrrl

    deepgrrl Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Such insightful lines coming from my mouths of my brothers! We're gonna get there yet y'all! The piece growed as it flowed. Very nice indeed.
     
  5. GQ

    GQ Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Derrick - Feelin' a might sensitive today...

    SB - You know how I do!!!! <~~~~ Who said that? :lol:

    deepgrrl - No doubt - there are some of us left fa sho'!!!

    Thanks for lookin' in ya'll!!!

    :peace:/:heart:
    GQ
     
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    Rashad Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    GQ

    Do yo thang Boi!!
    Cuz u have mastered loving the woman Bruh!! U Gentle Man!!
    :toast:
     
  7. GQ

    GQ Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Shad,

    A Gentleman be tryna do a lil sumthin' sumthin'!!!

    Thanks for the read no doubt!!!

    :peace:
    GQ
     
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    brotherman Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    still being you I see...poetically
     
  9. GQ

    GQ Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Yeah Bra-Man,

    Betta keep ya gurl from round me!!!! :lol:

    J/K dawg - you know what's up!!!

    Appreciate ya holla!!!

    :peace:
    GQ
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    feelin dis man ..........we all need a little at tymes
     
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