Black Poetry : Sensitive Knives

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Antar, May 5, 2004.

  1. Antar

    Antar Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i miss my Grandmother
    she probably woulda
    told me
    "boye you betta wera rubba"
    an fosho i woulda listens
    damm Big Mama
    i ain't piss on the flo
    i don't know what that
    Shi7 wuz
    an when you was in a coma
    i didn't stab that
    suction tube down
    your throat cause i aint
    love you
    i was just gettin
    madd cause you ain't
    wanna wake up

    cook some cheese samiches
    and them fly chinese noodles
    ooooh!
    LOL
    yuh
    then we can go outside
    and work in the garden
    do some conrete work
    tell them bums what fer
    come back in
    i really wanted to learn
    more of that sewin
    my femininity be showin
    only one can see
    is me and the trees
    when the winds blowin
    i'm still a warrior
    for show
    but in present times
    i need a lawyer
    i ain't forgot about
    them crookkked ***
    cops in GEORGIA
    yuh, i got somethin 4 ya
    neva ignore ya
    treat you like my kidz

    you was always
    so fly
    and forever is in
    my eye
    i think you the reason
    why for a looooong
    time i was
    out my mind
    for big titties
    took me a while to see
    more clearly
    you'se one of my
    best friends
    an foreva is
     
  2. Khasm13

    Khasm13 STAFF STAFF

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    deep scribe son...funny too :lol:
    keep kickin them out poet
    one love
    khasm
     
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    triniti424 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    lol awwww this was sweet lol look at grannys baby all Growd up and shtuff lolol :D
     
  4. Antar

    Antar Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Ha Ha <playgerizin Jay-Z>

    i gotsa laff back
    ya'll
    take it light


    one love,
    /antar
     
  5. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Grandma's advice was piercing with sage wisdom, and sometimes love hurts. Feelin this drop.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    i hear ya we all had our sweet moments at granny's
     
  7. SensualReality

    SensualReality Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I WAS WIT GRANNY ALL DAY TODAY.....:lol:
    loved this piece Ant you did it again
    come back now ya hear:wink:
     
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    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    very nice flow
    bringing sweet memories here
    nice indeed
    Peace
    BlueWater:heart:
     
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