Quiet Poetry Lounge : Sensing Love

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by MRS. LADY, Apr 12, 2008.

  1. MRS. LADY

    MRS. LADY Banned MEMBER

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    to touch
    to taste
    to see
    to smell
    to feel

    all the senses
    and none

    touch me
    my heart that is

    can't you feel it
    without a hand

    don't you salivate
    at the thought

    of holding love
    as I remember

    without aroma
    the way that you smell

    mind capitvates
    a picture that I see

    without even using
    my eyes although I am not blind

    I use every sense
    without any sense

    and I know in every sense
    that you have always been mine

    good thing I don't always listen to
    what I hear.......
     
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    Our senses can be touched, in so many different ways, but when someone touches your heart, nothing else can quite compare. I found this scribe to be quite touching.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    known the different and allowing the senses of will to act when that sweet feeling comes to heart

    beautiful scribe
     
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    i sense the true esscence of this piece Miss Lady nice work!
     
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    :em19: Go Girl!
    Love is More than the eye
    and to know love one MUST want more then it:)
    BLESS Sister
    Laying the Flows out on the Line!!!
     
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    Sweet! The sensation of feeling love, far more than eyes can behold alone
    Well written

    Thanks for sharing
     
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