Black Haiku : Senses

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  1. 2ndkoming

    2ndkoming New Member MEMBER

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    The Day is Over,
    You can't see my love for you,
    But you can feel it.

    Do u feel it?


    Tell me what u think
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    what not seen surely
    felt within heart and soulful
    inner feelings yes

    tyte drop and on point
    i feel u deeply within
    like a sweet rapture
     
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    The third eye has it
    While the sixth sense can feel it
    The vibes draw you near
     
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    deepy going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    within the darkness
    some energy warm and hot
    is that you my love..

    aah yes..i feel you...
     
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    It’s burning inside
    I can feel it leading me
    Feeling you deeply

    Chief of all senses
    It reaches out to find you
    I will see you…soon
     
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    What my senses feel
    My mind can appreciate
    Until our lips touch
     
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    Lay thyself upon my soft pillows
    and thirst no more.
    fore,to kiss
    is to rest...


    :star: :blush: :star: :blush: :star:
    Ya got it going on....
    :star: :blush: :star: :blush: :star:
     
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    My pillow rests...two heads
    I'm lost without you in my bed
    thanks for comming back home
     
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