Black Poetry : SENSE-u-US

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by JAD68, Jan 23, 2002.

  1. JAD68

    JAD68 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I see you even when we’re apart
    dreams elevate and illuminate my mind’s eye
    my focus is distorted by rhythmic silhouettes
    your kaleidoscopic beauty eclipses my vision

    ever present in my nostrils; burns the incense of love
    permeating from your essence
    a potpourri of aphrodisian scents fill the air:
    almonds; sandalwood; vanilla…
    an erotic aroma not soon to be contained

    inviting, is this feast, of ambrosian treats
    a cornucopian treasure of fruit and nectar
    I bow to drink from your cup and am nourished
    it’s overflow of milk –n- honey, quenches yet compels my thirst
    …I yearn for more…

    from your inner sanctum, I feel desire’s inferno
    the perspiration of 2 become 1, as we caress
    passion embraces us completely

    pleasurous screams bellow into the silence
    the wind transforms them 2 whispers on its wings
    yesterday, I heard it echo… into eternity tomorrow





    Poem by: James A. Davis, Jr.
    copyright: September 21, 2000
     
  2. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    welcome within JAD68

    welcome to da playground of destee's place
    flow ya love in motion as u vibe in tune
    one hear ya whispers as i welcome u within
    family & friendz :) :toast: :wave: :wave: :wave: :wave: :jumping: :toast:
     
  3. Danilyn

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    Nice to read ya!!!

    I see you joined months ago, but I don't recall seeing your name. Thanks for posting! I love this...looking forward to reading more!!!
    :wave:
     
  4. Reason

    Reason Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Welcome Poet!

    I can see that i'll enjoy readin your work!

    Respect
    Reas
     
  5. JAD68

    JAD68 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Feelin' the love

    Thanks family, for the love. i have posted in the past, but it's been a while. it's good to be back in the flow.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    indeed

    and i'm glad to see u flowin'
    hittin ya vibe to scribe upon
    da house .....stay wit it :)
     
  7. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    JAD68

    Nice flowetry.... :wave: Welcome!! :wave:


    Hope you will continue to share your vibe with the family. Looking forward to reading more of your work!




    N2
     
  8. cocobutterskyn

    cocobutterskyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Madd Sistahly Love

    :wave: Welcome to the family Jad. I enjoyed the read. Keep'em com'n. :)


    Poetically Turn'd Out!
    CCBSKYN :heart:
     
  9. dnommo

    dnommo Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    welcome back poet...this piece is true beauty

    i see B-more is holding it down in here.

    one.
     
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    i'm with dnommo. true beauty is this art.

    welcome and peace,
    jh.
     
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