Black Poetry : Sensations of you...

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  1. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Spread like the open sea
    Below a perfect horizon
    I felt you long ago …
    Pass the starz
    I watched…
    Loving from afar
    Hoping this day
    Would come…Now…we are here
    My love is coming down
    Something I didn’t want to touch
    Yet, want to touch

    I am just a country girl
    Falling for a
    ………city boy

    Rivers of you
    Flowing through my being
    ………..Finding
    The woman in me
    And you don’t even know it


    Like a soft summer breeze
    As your essence falls over me
    I know your touch
    …passed the distance
    You’re the high point
    …….of my dream
    Dayum I can scream

    For the way
    You….make me feel
    When we talk
    When we laugh
    ....But yet not touched
    Just our souls meeting
    Upon the midnight moon
    You are my morning
    Wanting to become one
    With you…
    Soul to soul
    As you roam in my mental
    I am locked into you
    Baptized in a love that feels
    ….good

    Rivers of you
    ………..Finding
    The woman in me


    I didn’t think…Didn’t know
    But all I been through
    Brought me to you
    A soul saved
    A joy deep inside
    Ready to share
    Sanctified in my love
    ….For my Savior
    Gave me birth of a new love
    ……Of self
    And you walked in my life
    Like an angel from above


    (C) 2005
    ROSEFIRE
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    dis was so ummm!
    sen-sa-tion-al as da
    maze of beauty flow
    taken da heart of love
    to new high as two
    fly under glist ..........

    awesome scribing and sweet what a feeling.
     
  3. Wisdom7

    Wisdom7 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Touching poem! I liked the "Rivers of you finding the woman in me."
     
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    This is the kind of drop that makes people feel the warm sensation inside when they read this. :terrific:
     
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    thank you all for the love
     
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    Auroraflower Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    aww this was beautifull.....


    expressed sis:heart: ...


    :geek: the love for someone .....
    those feelings and emotions that someone can bring out of you.....



    keep expressing sis ..
    and bring us more of you romantic and touching poems:heart:







    Loveauroraflower:heart:
     
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    I felt the sensation.
    I don't know about u,
    but I........
    ....felt the sensation
    Feelin' so warm inside.
     
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    re: hi

    good-afternoon MzBlkAngel,


    decided to check out a few poems today...

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    I am just a country girl
    Falling for a
    ………city boy
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    thats beautiful within itself, as it still amazes me how one can connect with another soul in reality without ever meeting her/him in person... at this time the great sensation you are experiencing should be cherished, etc... in all the picture you painted has left me speechless, AS thy poetry seems to take hold of one's soul...
    -smile-


    have a nice day...

    sincerely,
    c.t.adams-///
     
  9. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you all for the love and blessings on this peace


    Angel
     
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    to hot for me to comment all i wanna do is pop your collar.