Black Poetry : SenSated

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  1. GQ

    GQ Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Elixired spirits meant to poison me
    with passion
    to be at her beck and call

    Drowning in my own sweet inhale of
    her; my exhaled breath of love proves
    fantastically fatal to my heart;
    tantalizingly toxic to my soul

    Mellowed by the madness she drives
    me to, lightheadedness overcomes me
    and evokes throes of loving vibes all
    brought to bear by her innate need

    to

    induce me
    with her
    sensuality


    &

    entice me
    with her softness


    but

    take me
    fully with easy, hypnotic cunning


    Looking upon her through
    closed, dreamy
    soul windows,
    I waft
    soundly, peacefully
    as she touches my sanities
    with the
    tenderness and care
    of a feather's caress

    The
    "subliminal me"
    state
    she desires
    is perpetuated
    as musical tones ring quietly throughout my mental

    I hear the sweetest of lullabies deep within my
    unconscious ear; surely meant to carry me to
    REM sleep
    while she watches over me in song

    It is then I become

    captured wholly
    in spirit

    lovingly arrested
    in body

    SenSated
    by her
    I am...

    ©GQINC2K2
     
  2. LiLi

    LiLi Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this put me in a dream state and i loved every moment of it! thank you!!
     
  3. wildflower7

    wildflower7 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    yeah... luuuvly! -7:spinstar:
     
  4. elayne.

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    bighead.


    soooo smoove & serene... are you! :)

    & i... am lovin' it... complete-ly! (that's rt) :D

    itsallLove, chile.

    elayne.