Black Poetry : Senior Year

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  1. SwtT

    SwtT Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    "Ladies and Gentleman, the class of 2004"..........


    Since my freshman year, I have wondered what will it be like
    To see all of my friends names gettin read on the mike
    Stephanie......Sharon...Amber...and the rest of my girls
    Dressed in orange, ready to recieve the world
    I wonder what this year will have in store
    Will I find true love....and hopefully more?
    Soon approaches my 18th year
    Sumthing my parents may both fear
    They have to finally accept the fact their lil baby is all grown up
    I learned from my parents to not mess my life up
    Even though a lot of us are on different paths
    I'll never forget all if the high school jokes and laughs
    Like that time Deidra got punked out
    Or when Dion got beat up ..when he bragged he had clout
    Damm so many of my friends lost their way..
    Instead of preparing of college, its for a baby
    It's cool though I ain't gonna preach, I clouda made the same mistake
    I ain't gonna brag about not messing up..I would be fake
    This will be my last year walking down those halls..
    Next year i'll be behind dormitory walls
    I feel like My senior year is almost like a dream
    I've feeling a sense of completetion I ain't never seen
    And on May 27th 2004, I' ll walk with my head up high
    My family will be cheering and I'll try not to cry..
    So this year, Im gonna live it up..
    Have the best school spirit like nuttins up
    And so I raise the bar for all of my G's
    Cus this year will be better than 03!!!!!
    This will be the last time we all come together
    Except for sum few college letters...
    So all of my class raise a toast..
    For all the people who will hold it down the most...
    Cuz this will be the last year
    Make the most of our senior year.....
     
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    Yea.. make the most. Remember your friends.
     
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    wonderful sistah
    ^5 this is indeed
    your time to shine
    much love to you
    Peace
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    fine the blessing in each one and remember the bond
    of friendship this was very nice
     
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    Sounds like you got your stuff together pretty well, girl, and I'm so happy to hear that. All I would say is to enjoy every moment this year - the freedom, the good health, the friends. Those things are all golden right now. It's a very special time in your life, so work hard and have fun. :)

    ps - nice flow
     
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    Thank you everybody:D
     
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    shine thats all i can say
    just shine...
     
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    SwtT Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks msblk angel..I intend to:)
     
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    this brings back memories of my senior year:D...very nice flow...
     
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    Very nice...SwtT, you bring back such memories

    Have a great year and definitely make the most of it, positively.

    You will always cherish these moment, they can bring you
    comfort and joy in years to come!

    Good Luck!
     
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